Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy drawing, although I am not very skilled. During my school years, I took art classes where we often drew portraits, trees, and landscapes. These experiences helped me appreciate art more.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu văn tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like the idea of going to galleries, although I haven't had the chance to visit one yet. In the future, I would love to see some famous paintings because I believe it is a great way to appreciate art and learn about different cultures.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu văn mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Not really, because art is not my major. However, I think having basic knowledge about art, such as color theory and composition, can be useful. Nevertheless, I don't consider it essential for my future career.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a kid. In both primary and secondary school, we had art classes where we often painted trees and landscapes. These activities helped me develop my imagination.

× I'm not skilled this

✓ I'm not skilled at this

The verb 'skilled' is usually followed by the preposition 'at' to indicate the area of skill. Omitting 'at' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'skilled at' when referring to abilities.

× to my school time, We have a subject called art

✓ During my school time, we had a subject called art

The phrase 'to my school time' is incorrect; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a period. Also, 'We' should be lowercase 'we' as it is mid-sentence. Suggestion: Use 'during' to refer to a time period and maintain proper capitalization.

× we have to draw a lot of portrait, tree and landscape

✓ we had to draw a lot of portraits, trees, and landscapes

The nouns 'portrait', 'tree', and 'landscape' should be plural to match 'a lot of'. Also, tense should be past ('had') to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'a lot of' and maintain consistent tense.

× Even I, although I'm I'm not good at.

✓ Even though I'm not good at it.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Even I' is unnecessary and 'at' requires an object. Suggestion: Use 'Even though I'm not good at it' for clarity and correctness.

× I like the idea of going galleries

✓ I like the idea of going to galleries

The verb 'going' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Omitting 'to' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'going to' when referring to visiting places.

× I haven't had the chance to visit 1 yet

✓ I haven't had the chance to visit one yet

The number '1' should be spelled out as 'one' in formal speech. Suggestion: Spell out numbers under ten in formal contexts.

× learn more about the different cultures visiting

✓ learn more about the different cultures by visiting

The phrase 'cultures visiting' is unclear and incorrect. Adding 'by' clarifies that visiting is the method to learn about cultures. Suggestion: Use 'by' to indicate the means of learning.

× art subject to color theory or the composition of a painting can be useful

✓ art subjects such as color theory or the composition of a painting can be useful

The phrase 'art subject to color theory' is incorrect. 'Such as' introduces examples properly. Suggestion: Use 'such as' to list examples.

× I learned drawing when I was a kid in both, right In both primary and secondary school

✓ I learned drawing when I was a kid in both primary and secondary school

The phrase 'in both, right In both' is redundant and incorrect. Suggestion: Remove redundancy and use 'in both primary and secondary school'.

× we often painted and reproached, uh, trees and landscapes

✓ we often painted and reproduced, uh, trees and landscapes

The word 'reproached' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'reproduced'. Suggestion: Use 'reproduced' when referring to copying or creating images.