Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够贴切，混淆了绘画和珠宝，表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议回答时紧扣问题，避免跑题，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

예시: Yes, I like drawing because it allows me to express my creativity and relax after a busy day.

제안: 回答较为简短且语法不够准确，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，注意时态和语法，增加细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I often visit art galleries. Last week, I went to a famous gallery in Shanghai where there was a fabulous exhibition of modern art.

제안: 表达有些混乱，观点不够明确。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达自己的看法，并给出具体理由。

예시: I want to learn more about art because it can be subjective and sometimes hard to understand. By studying it, I hope to appreciate different styles better.

제안: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意时态和句子结构。

예시: No, I didn't learn drawing as a child. I only started drawing in high school, and I still remember the first picture I drew was very special to me.

× Yes, of course I like jewelry and I believe in this world during has become an indispensable part of in our lives because it can relax myself a lot.

✓ Yes, of course I like jewelry and I believe it has become an indispensable part of our lives because it can relax me a lot.

句中“during”和“in”使用错误，应去掉“during”，并将“in our lives”前的“of”保留，且“myself”应改为宾格“me”。

× Yeah, I usually go to the gallery. I yes, it's the last week I go into the gallery in Shanghai. It was very, very famous and fabulous show.

✓ Yeah, I usually go to the gallery. Yes, last week I went to the gallery in Shanghai. It was a very famous and fabulous show.

“it's the last week”时态和表达错误，应改为过去时“last week”。“go into”应改为“went to”。“show”前缺少冠词“a”。

× I think art is difficult to learn because art is invisible. I can't just, I can't judge. This one is odd, this one is not. So I want to learn more, but in the end, maybe I can't get the real thing.

✓ I think art is difficult to learn because art is invisible. I can't just judge; I can't say this one is odd and this one is not. So I want to learn more, but in the end, maybe I can't get the real thing.

句中“can't just, I can't judge”表达不完整，应合并为“can't just judge”。“This one is odd, this one is not”缺少连接词，改为“say this one is odd and this one is not”。

× No, when I'm a kid I didn't enjoy Island Island during from my high school. The first time I touched the pencils to write I think is the most beautiful picture I have white in my life.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't enjoy Island Island. I started during high school. The first time I touched the pencils to write, I think it was the most beautiful picture I have drawn in my life.

“I'm a kid”应改为过去时“I was a kid”。“didn't enjoy Island Island during from my high school”表达混乱，应拆分为两句并调整时态。最后一句“have white”应为“have drawn”，动词错误。