Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢画画的情感，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，避免句子碎片，尝试用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy drawing because it helps me relax and experience different emotions. I often draw green trees or colorful flowers. Whenever I feel bored, I pick up my pencil and start drawing, which makes me feel happy.

제안: 回答内容较为完整，但表达不够自然，部分词汇使用不当，如“need to go”应改为“like to go”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子结构，避免重复词汇。

예시: Yes, I like to visit galleries, such as history and art galleries. There is a large history gallery near my home, and I often go there on weekends because I want to learn about my country's history and important events.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“bring the new mood”不自然，且“appreciate about the those”错误。建议学习正确的表达方式，使用更具体的细节来支持观点。

예시: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is a beautiful subject. It can improve my mood and boost my confidence. Whenever I see famous artworks, I appreciate their creativity and the emotions they convey.

제안: 回答中时态使用错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议加强时态的学习，注意主谓一致，使用完整句子表达思想。

예시: I started learning drawing when I was 10 years old. At that time, my father encouraged me because he thought drawing was a good habit. Drawing helps me improve my mood and also allows me to learn new skills.

× Like I often drawing about green trees or colorful flowers.

✓ Like I often draw green trees or colorful flowers.

这里动词应使用原形draw，而不是动名词drawing，因为主语是I，动词需要与主语搭配使用原形。

× Every time when I feel boring, I join.

✓ Every time when I feel bored, I join in.

feel boring是错误表达，应该用feel bored表示感到无聊；另外，动词join后面需要加介词in，表示参与某事。

× Make me feel happiness.

✓ It makes me feel happy.

happiness是名词，句中需要形容词happy来修饰feel，且句子缺少主语，应加上it。

× There is a big, big history gallery near my home.

✓ There is a big history gallery near my home.

重复使用big不合适，形容词不应重复，去掉一个big即可。

× I always go there in the weekends because I want to know about our country's history and more famous history, important events.

✓ I always go there on the weekends because I want to know about our country's history and more famous historical important events.

表示特定时间应使用介词on而非in；history前应加形容词historical修饰，且important events前应加连词and连接。

× Every time when I see some famous works of art, I will appreciate about the those.

✓ Every time when I see some famous works of art, I will appreciate those.

动词appreciate后不需要介词about；the those是错误搭配，应去掉the。

× I had the drawing when I was 10 years old.

✓ I learned drawing when I was 10 years old.

这里应使用learned表示学习动作，had the drawing表达不准确且时态不合适。

× He think drawing is good habit in our daily life.

✓ He thinks drawing is a good habit in our daily life.

主语He为第三人称单数，动词think应加s变为thinks；good habit前应加不定冠词a。

× Also I learn a new skills.

✓ Also I learn new skills.

skills是复数，前面不应加不定冠词a。