Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达自己的观点。

예시: Yes, I like drawing, but I feel I lack talent because I struggle to draw specific lines or details accurately.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并具体描述参观经历。

예시: Yes, I love going to galleries. Last month, I traveled to Sichuan province and visited a famous art university's gallery with my friend, which was a special experience.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法不流畅的问题。建议简化表达，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明学习艺术的计划和原因。

예시: Yes, I want to learn more about art. In the future, I plan to take professional painting courses during my free time because I feel I need guidance to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并具体说明学习绘画的经历和水平。

예시: Yes, my mom helped me take painting lessons when I was young. I studied for two years at an art school, but I can only draw simple children's pictures.

× I drop badly when I want to want to draw some specific specific line or some item.

✓ I draw badly when I want to draw some specific line or some item.

这里的'drop'是错误的动词形式，应该用'draw'表示绘画。'want to want to'重复，应去掉一个。'specific specific'重复，应去掉一个。

× Umm last last month I go travel to Sichuan province and I invite my friend to 1 famous art university to to visit their gallery and save some special.

✓ Umm last month I went to travel to Sichuan province and I invited my friend to a famous art university to visit their gallery and save some special.

时间是过去时，动词应使用过去式，'go'改为'went'，'invite'改为'invited'。'last last'重复，应去掉一个。'1'应改为'a'。'to to'重复，应去掉一个。

× I invited my friend to 1 famous art university to to visit their gallery and save some special.

✓ I invited my friend to a famous art university to visit their gallery and see some special exhibits.

'1'用法错误，应该用冠词'a'。'save some special'表达不清，推测应为'see some special exhibits'。

× Maybe in the future in my leisure time I will take part in some profession course to learn more about painting.

✓ Maybe in the future in my leisure time I will take part in some professional courses to learn more about painting.

'profession course'应为形容词+名词结构，改为'professional courses'。

× Yes, when I was a kid my mom helped me with a painting, painting lessons when I was young.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid my mom helped me with painting lessons when I was young.

'a painting, painting lessons'重复且不自然，应去掉第一个'painting,'。

× I I have learned. I I have learned for two years at Steer, but I I only can draw some simple simple child painting.

✓ I have learned for two years at Steer, but I can only draw some simple child paintings.

'I I'重复，应去掉一个。'only can'顺序错误，应为'can only'。'simple simple'重复，应去掉一个。'child painting'应为复数形式'child paintings'。