Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态错误和词汇使用不当。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇来描述感受。

예시: Yes, I like drawing. When I was a child, I often drew pictures in my free time because it made me feel relaxed and created a peaceful atmosphere.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子结构不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并具体说明参观画廊的感受。

예시: Yes, I like going to galleries because I can see different artworks and learn new things. It makes me feel relaxed and inspired.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明想学习艺术的原因。

예시: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is mysterious and fascinating. I believe that studying it deeply will help me gain more knowledge.

제안: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态使用，改进句子结构，并具体说明学习绘画的经历和收获。

예시: Yes, I enjoyed drawing when I was a kid. My primary school held art lessons every week, which helped me develop my creativity and skills.

× When I was a child I often draw pictures in the part time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and make a quiet circum circumstance for me.

✓ When I was a child I often drew pictures in my spare time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and creates a quiet circumstance for me.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态，因此将'draw'改为'drew'。另外，'part time'应改为'spare time'表示空闲时间，'make'应与主语'joy'保持一致，改为'creates'。

× When I was a child I often draw pictures in the part time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and make a quiet circum circumstance for me.

✓ When I was a child I often drew pictures in my spare time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and creates a quiet circumstance for me.

'in the part time'用法错误，正确表达应为'in my spare time'，表示“在我的空闲时间”。

× When I was a child I often draw pictures in the part time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and make a quiet circum circumstance for me.

✓ When I was a child I often drew pictures in my spare time and I think joy makes me feel relaxed and creates a quiet circumstance for me.

'circum circumstance'是重复且错误的表达，应改为单数形式'circumstance'。

× Yes, I like go to the gallery where can I can see different artworks and learn new knowledge.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the gallery where I can see different artworks and learn new knowledge.

'like'后面应接不定式'to go'，而不是动词原形'go'。此外，'where can I can see'语序错误，应为'where I can see'。

× Yes, I like go to the gallery where can I can see different artworks and learn new knowledge.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the gallery where I can see different artworks and learn new knowledge.

句子中主语是第三人称单数，动词应与之保持一致，且语序应正确。

× It's makes me feel relaxing and feel a lot of sense of.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and gives me a strong sense of satisfaction.

'It's makes'中'It'和'makes'重复，正确应为'It makes'。'relaxing'应改为形容词'relaxed'描述感受。'a lot of sense of'表达不完整，应补充完整表达。

× It's makes me feel relaxing and feel a lot of sense of.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and gives me a strong sense of satisfaction.

'relaxing'是现在分词，表示使人放松的，描述感受时应使用形容词'relaxed'。

× Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I think art is very a mystery and if I learn deeply I think I will find more knowledge.

✓ Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I think art is very mysterious and if I study deeply I think I will find more knowledge.

'very a mystery'中冠词和形容词顺序错误，应为'very mysterious'。

× Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I think art is very a mystery and if I learn deeply I think I will find more knowledge.

✓ Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I think art is very mysterious and if I study deeply I think I will find more knowledge.

'learn deeply'用法不当，'learn'后不直接接副词'deeply'，应改为'study deeply'或'delve deeply into'。

× Yes, I did enjoy when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I did enjoy it when I was a kid.

'did enjoy'后缺少宾语，需加'it'。

× My primary school often took art lessons every week and it's developed my creativity and skills.

✓ My primary school often held art lessons every week and it developed my creativity and skills.

'took art lessons'用法不当，学校应使用'held art lessons'。'it's developed'时态不符，改为过去时'developed'。