Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "patient" thay vì "patience". Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like drawing because it helps me relax after a busy day. It is a good way to express my emotions and creativity.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và mạch lạc.

예시: To be honest, I don't often go to art galleries because I have little free time. I usually spend my time studying at home or exercising with my friends.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về mong muốn học hỏi thêm về nghệ thuật và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

예시: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it plays an important role in my life. For example, I enjoy music as it helps me relax after a busy day.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và giải thích thêm về sở thích hoặc hoạt động của bạn khi còn nhỏ.

예시: No, I did not learn drawing when I was a child. Instead, I often watched TV and played tennis during my free time.

× Yes, I have a patient for drawing because it's fine.

✓ Yes, I have patience for drawing because it's fine.

The word 'patient' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'patience' which means the ability to wait or endure. 'Patient' is an adjective or noun referring to a sick person, so it is a wrong word choice.

× It's relaxing and unclear after a day.

✓ It's relaxing and unclear after a day.

The word 'unclear' does not fit the context. Possibly the intended word is 'unwind' or 'calm'. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, this is a vocabulary issue and not corrected here.

× Additional ways I feel expressed emotion.

✓ Additionally, I feel expressed emotion.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Additional ways' is a fragment and does not connect properly. The correction improves sentence flow by starting with 'Additionally' and making it a complete sentence.

× To be honest, I don't get to this generally because I don't a little time I spend time for a study at home in doing exercise with my friends.

✓ To be honest, I don't go to this generally because I don't have much time; I spend time studying at home and doing exercise with my friends.

The original sentence has multiple preposition and verb usage errors: 'get to this' should be 'go to this'; 'don't a little time' is missing 'have' and incorrect quantifier; 'for a study' should be 'studying'; 'in doing exercise' should be 'doing exercise'. The correction fixes these preposition and verb usage errors.

× Art is prayer feature role in my life.

✓ Art plays a proper role in my life.

The phrase 'prayer feature role' is incorrect. Likely intended 'proper' or 'important' role. 'Prayer' is a noun unrelated here. This is a vocabulary error, but 'plays a proper role' corrects the grammar structure.

× For instance, music have means relation and quiet after a business day.

✓ For instance, music has means of relaxation and quiet after a business day.

'Music' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'means relation' is incorrect; likely intended 'means of relaxation'. The correction fixes subject-verb agreement and clarifies meaning.

× Additionally, musics.

✓ Additionally, music.

'Music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form 'musics'. The correction removes the plural form.

× To be honest, I did not learned drawing when I am children.

✓ To be honest, I did not learn drawing when I was a child.

After 'did not', the base form of the verb 'learn' should be used, not the past tense 'learned'. Also, 'I am children' is incorrect; it should be 'I was a child' to match past tense and singular subject.

× On the basic tennis I often watching TV and plays in this instrument that's violently.

✓ Basically, I often watch TV and play this instrument, which is violent.

'On the basic tennis' is incorrect; likely intended 'Basically'. 'Watching' should be 'watch' to match present tense with 'often'. 'Plays' should be 'play' to agree with 'I'. 'That's violently' is incorrect; 'which is violent' is better. The correction fixes quantifiers, verb forms, and sentence structure.