Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有停顿和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且表达更连贯自然。

예시: Yes, I really love drawing. I started learning it when I was a child. Although I gave it up for a while, I still enjoy it because drawing helps me capture happy moments.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用更准确的连接词，避免断句过短，表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like going to galleries because I am a quiet and reserved person. Compared to attending parties, I prefer galleries as they help me feel relaxed and happy. Also, I enjoy spending time appreciating the paintings.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且重复，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，表达更清晰完整。

예시: Yes, I want to learn more about art. My major is drama, cinema, television, and literature, which are all forms of art. I believe different kinds of art are connected, so I am interested in exploring them further.

제안: 回答中有语法和发音错误，句子结构不完整，建议注意冠词和名词的正确使用，句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, of course. My grandfather is an actual designer, so he taught me many drawing skills like sketching and cartooning. I love drawing because it helps me capture unforgettable moments.

× Although I give up at, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some.

✓ Although I gave up at times, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some moments.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词“give”应使用过去式“gave”。

× Although I give up at, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some.

✓ Although I gave up at times, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some moments.

短语“give up at”不正确，应该使用“give up at times”表示“有时放弃”。

× Although I give up at, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some. Hapiness. You.

✓ Although I gave up at times, I still love it very much because I think drawing helps me to capture some happiness.

句子结构不完整，断句错误，导致意思不清，应合并并补充完整。

× Also I could. Enjoy my own time. With the paintings.

✓ Also, I could enjoy my own time with the paintings.

“Enjoy my own time”与“with the paintings”之间不应断开，应连贯表达。

× so in contrasted to attend some party I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ so in contrast to attending some parties, I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

短语“in contrasted to”错误，应为“in contrast to”，且“attend”应改为动名词“attending”。

× so in contrasted to attend some party I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ so in contrast to attending some parties, I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

介词后应接动名词形式，故“attend”应改为“attending”。

× so in contrasted to attend some party I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ so in contrast to attending some parties, I prefer to go to the gallery because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

“some party”应为复数形式“some parties”，表示泛指多个聚会。

× Also I could. Enjoy my own time. With the paintings.

✓ Also, I could enjoy my own time with the paintings.

“Enjoy my own time with the paintings”表达连贯，断句错误导致理解困难。

× So it is a kind of art and I believe that every every kind of. Art have a connections, so I want to learn more about it.

✓ So it is a kind of art and I believe that every kind of art has connections, so I want to learn more about it.

“every kind of art”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数“has”，而非复数“have”。

× So it is a kind of art and I believe that every every kind of. Art have a connections, so I want to learn more about it.

✓ So it is a kind of art and I believe that every kind of art has connections, so I want to learn more about it.

“a connections”中“connections”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× my Gran father is A at it actual designer so he taught me a lot of skills of drawing like the sketch and. Cartoon

✓ My grandfather is an actual designer, so he taught me a lot of drawing skills like sketching and cartoons.

“Gran father”应为“grandfather”，“a at it actual designer”语序错误，应为“an actual designer”。

× my Gran father is A at it actual designer so he taught me a lot of skills of drawing like the sketch and. Cartoon

✓ My grandfather is an actual designer, so he taught me a lot of drawing skills like sketching and cartoons.

冠词使用错误，“A at it actual designer”应为“an actual designer”。

× my Gran father is A at it actual designer so he taught me a lot of skills of drawing like the sketch and. Cartoon

✓ My grandfather is an actual designer, so he taught me a lot of drawing skills like sketching and cartoons.

“sketch”和“cartoon”应使用动名词形式“sketching”和复数“cartoons”表示绘画技能。