Teamwork— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免冗余，并且使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy teamwork because my colleagues have different perspectives, which helps us find creative solutions to problems we face.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并且清晰表达合作的具体情况和收获。

예시: Yes, I have teamed up with a colleague before. We realized we shared the same goals, so we worked together, which helped me improve my communication skills by observing her approach.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且句子未完整表达意思，建议简洁明了地说明学到的具体内容。

예시: Working in a team has improved my communication skills and taught me how to persuade colleagues from different departments to cooperate effectively.

제안: 回答不完整且有重复，表达混乱，建议练习完整表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Sometimes, teamwork can reduce efficiency because team members have different working styles, making it challenging to coordinate effectively.

× My colleagues are different from me, but they are extremely supportive and to be candidates.

✓ My colleagues are different from me, but they are extremely supportive and good candidates.

句中“to be candidates”用法不正确，应改为“good candidates”表示“优秀的候选人”。这里是形容词用法错误，需用形容词修饰名词。

× I always feel surprised that how they have creative ways to solve the problem we face.

✓ I am always surprised at how they have creative ways to solve the problems we face.

“feel surprised that how”结构不正确，正确表达应为“am surprised at how”，且“problem”应为复数“problems”，因为通常面对多个问题。

× I always feel surprised that how they have creative ways to solve the problem we face.

✓ I am always surprised at how they have creative ways to solve the problems we face.

“problem”应为复数形式“problems”，因为通常面对多个问题。

× Yes, I used to team up with my colleague.

✓ Yes, I used to team up with my colleagues.

“colleague”应为复数“colleagues”，表示与多位同事合作。

× When we found that we are in touch with the same creator, we decided to work together and it really helped me to improve my communication skills by watching how she communicate with.

✓ When we found that we were in touch with the same creator, we decided to work together and it really helped me to improve my communication skills by watching how she communicates.

“communicate with”缺少宾语，且动词应为第三人称单数“communicates”。“are”应改为过去时“were”，与前文时态一致。

× When we found that we are in touch with the same creator, we decided to work together and it really helped me to improve my communication skills by watching how she communicate with.

✓ When we found that we were in touch with the same creator, we decided to work together and it really helped me to improve my communication skills by watching how she communicates.

“are”应改为过去时“were”，因为句子描述的是过去的情况。

× I think my experience working of working in a team do help me improve my communication skills.

✓ I think my experience of working in a team does help me improve my communication skills.

“working of working”重复，应改为“experience of working”。“do”应改为“does”，与单数主语“experience”保持一致。

× I think my experience working of working in a team do help me improve my communication skills.

✓ I think my experience of working in a team does help me improve my communication skills.

主语“experience”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“does”。

× It made me realize that how I can convince the colleagues from different department to cooperate with me so we can.

✓ It made me realize how I can convince colleagues from different departments to cooperate with me so that we can succeed.

“that how”结构不正确，应为“realize how”。“department”应为复数“departments”。句尾不完整，补充“succeed”使句子完整。

× It made me realize that how I can convince the colleagues from different department to cooperate with me so we can.

✓ It made me realize how I can convince colleagues from different departments to cooperate with me so that we can succeed.

“department”应为复数“departments”，表示多个部门。

× I think sometimes it's hard to improve the work efficiency in the teamwork Cause cause cause the team members may have may have fi various working styles.

✓ I think sometimes it's hard to improve work efficiency in teamwork because the team members may have various working styles.

句中重复词“Cause cause cause”和“may have may have fi”是错误，应删除重复并改为连词“because”。“the teamwork”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× I think sometimes it's hard to improve the work efficiency in the teamwork Cause cause cause the team members may have may have fi various working styles.

✓ I think sometimes it's hard to improve work efficiency in teamwork because the team members may have various working styles.

“the teamwork”中“the”不必要，通常“teamwork”作为不可数名词不加冠词。

× It's very difficult to find a.

✓ It's very difficult to find a solution.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“solution”使句子完整。