Teamwork— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like teamwork?
수험생
Yes, I like teamwork because I enjoy being the leader of the team, which can make me feel more confident.
시험관
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
수험생
Yes, I have teamed up with my classmates to organize a program 10 years ago. We wanted to help the pro children in rural areas with their studies.
시험관
What do you learn from working in a team?
수험생
I find out that says the most important part of teamwork is cooperation. As a leader I need to manage the whole team and make sure all the procedure is going well.
시험관
What do you dislike about teamwork?
수험생
Sometimes my roommates contradict with each other, so it's very difficult for me to maintain the good relationship.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like teamwork?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“because”和“which”引起的冗余，同时可以丰富内容，说明为什么当领导让你更自信。
예시: Yes, I enjoy teamwork, especially when I take on the role of a leader, as it helps me build confidence and improve my communication skills.
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中应注意用词准确，如“pro children”应为“poor children”，并且可以增加细节说明活动内容和个人贡献，使回答更具体。
예시: Yes, about ten years ago, I collaborated with my classmates to organize a program aimed at helping poor children in rural areas improve their studies by providing tutoring and learning materials.
What do you learn from working in a team?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，应注意句子结构和时态，同时使用连接词使内容更连贯。
예시: I have learned that cooperation is the most important aspect of teamwork. As a leader, I need to manage the team effectively and ensure that all procedures run smoothly.
What do you dislike about teamwork?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中“roommates”用词不当，应为“team members”，并且表达不够具体，可以详细说明冲突的原因及如何应对。
예시: Sometimes, team members have conflicting opinions, which makes it challenging for me to maintain good relationships and keep the team united.
문법
× Yes, I have teamed up with my classmates to organize a program 10 years ago.
✓ Yes, I teamed up with my classmates to organize a program 10 years ago.
句中提到具体的过去时间点“10 years ago”，应使用一般过去时而非现在完成时。现在完成时用于未指明具体时间的过去经历。
× We wanted to help the pro children in rural areas with their studies.
✓ We wanted to help the poor children in rural areas with their studies.
单词“pro”应为“poor”，这是拼写错误，导致词义错误。
× I find out that says the most important part of teamwork is cooperation.
✓ I find that the most important part of teamwork is cooperation.
句中“find out that says”结构不正确，冗余且语法错误，应简化为“I find that...”。
× As a leader I need to manage the whole team and make sure all the procedure is going well.
✓ As a leader I need to manage the whole team and make sure all the procedures are going well.
“procedure”应使用复数形式“procedures”，因为指多个步骤或过程。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致，改为“are”。
× Sometimes my roommates contradict with each other, so it's very difficult for me to maintain the good relationship.
✓ Sometimes my roommates contradict each other, so it's very difficult for me to maintain a good relationship.
动词“contradict”后不加介词“with”，直接加宾语。且“the good relationship”应改为不定冠词“a good relationship”，表示一般关系。
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