Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 brief supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “taught me math,” “explained things,” “in an easier way”).

예시: Yes. My favourite teacher was my primary school math teacher because she explained difficult topics very clearly. For example, she always broke problems down into two simple steps, which made them easy to understand. As a result, I started to enjoy math and did better in tests.

제안: Respond directly and succinctly. Use correct tense and prepositions when explaining the reason (e.g., “I am not in touch” / “I moved to Canada”). Avoid repeating the same phrase. Provide one sentence of brief extra detail if needed.

예시: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved from India to Canada a few years ago. It has been difficult to keep in contact since we live in different countries.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence describing how she helped, then give a specific example using correct time expressions (e.g., “when I was in third grade”). Remove unrelated fragments. Use linking words like “for example” or “once” to make the story coherent.

예시: She helped me in several ways, especially by being patient and supportive. For example, when I was in third grade I once forgot my pencil box and she lent me pencils and encouraged me not to worry, which made me feel more confident in class.

제안: Give a clear opinion and a concise reason using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like “capability is to be high.” Instead, say “teaching requires a lot of responsibility and patience, which I don’t think I have.” Optionally add a brief alternative career interest.

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher because teaching requires a lot of responsibility and patience, and I don't think I have the temperament for it. I would prefer a job with less day-to-day responsibility for other people, such as working in IT or business.

× Yes, I have a favorite teacher in my thought standard.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher from my primary school.

The original uses incorrect and unclear pronouns/phrasing ('in my thought standard'). Replace with a clear noun phrase 'from my primary school' to specify which teacher. Use consistent noun phrases rather than pronoun-like fragments.

× She studied me the math subject.

✓ She taught me math.

The verb 'study' was incorrectly used with the person as object. Use 'teach' + person + object (She taught me math). Also remove the definite article 'the' before 'math' unless referring to a specific course.

× I love the math subject a lot.

✓ I love math a lot.

The article 'the' and the word 'subject' are unnecessary. Use the uncountable noun 'math' without 'the' for a general statement.

× She cleared all things in easy 2 steps.

✓ She explained everything in two easy steps.

The phrase 'cleared all things' is unnatural. Use 'explained everything' and write numbers in words in formal sentences ('two'). Also include adjective order: 'two easy steps.'

× I understand in better.

✓ I understand better.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. Use the adverb 'better' directly after the verb 'understand.'

× I understand in better way with this teacher with.

✓ I understand things better with this teacher.

Remove the extra 'in' and final 'with.' Use correct word order: 'understand things better with this teacher.'

× No, I still not in touch with my family school teacher because I leave that country home countries in India.

✓ No, I am still not in touch with my primary school teacher because I left my home country, India.

Multiple issues: verb tense and form ('I still not in touch' needs auxiliary 'am' and negative placement), wrong noun phrase 'family school teacher' should be 'primary school teacher,' and past tense 'leave' should be 'left' when referring to a completed action. Also phrase 'that country home countries' is unclear; replace with 'my home country, India.'

× Now I live in Canada.

✓ Now I live in Canada.

This sentence is correct. It uses present simple appropriately to state current residence. No change needed.

× So that is the reason. That was the reason. So that was the reason I will not contact in my primary teacher.

✓ So that is the reason. I will not contact my primary school teacher.

Remove repetitive sentences and incorrect preposition 'in' after 'contact.' Use direct object 'contact my primary school teacher.' Maintain consistent tense: present future 'I will not contact.'

× What way did you eat? And my name is my teacher.

✓ In what way did she help me? Her name is [teacher's name].

The student's reply is confused. 'What way did you eat?' is unrelated and incorrect. The question asked how the teacher helped, so respond 'In what way did she help me?' or directly describe the help. Also 'my name is my teacher' is meaningless; likely intended to give the teacher's name.

× My favorite teacher helped me when I was in 3rd standard one of the day.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me when I was in the 3rd grade one day.

Use '3rd grade' (or '3rd standard' regionally) and 'one day' for a single occasion. 'One of the day' is incorrect. Maintain past tense 'helped' which is correct.

× One of the days I forgot to take my pencil box, she helped me in giving pencil.

✓ One day I forgot to bring my pencil case, and she helped me by giving me a pencil.

Use 'one day' not 'one of the days.' 'Pencil box' is better as 'pencil case.' Use 'bring' instead of 'take' for items to school. Rephrase 'helped me in giving pencil' to 'helped me by giving me a pencil' for correct verb and object structure.

× No, I don't want to be teacher in future because teacher have a lot of responsibility regarding to the child which means capability is to be high responsibility high.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because teachers have a lot of responsibility for children, which requires a high level of capability.

Add the article 'a' before 'teacher.' Use plural 'teachers have' to agree with subject. Replace 'regarding to the child' with 'for children.' Rephrase 'which means capability is to be high responsibility high' to a clear clause: 'which requires a high level of capability.'

× So I have not that much capability.

✓ So I don't have that much ability.

Use the contraction 'don't' with present simple for negation and replace 'capability' with the more natural 'ability' in this context. Also 'So' can remain to link ideas.