Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, use correct grammar (pronouns, verb forms), and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes. My favourite teacher at university is Ms Roshanar Begum. She is very professional and explains difficult topics clearly, so I understand them better. Also, she is friendly and approachable, which makes me feel comfortable asking questions. For example, she helped me improve my presentation skills by giving practical tips and feedback.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and cohesive linking words. Correct tense and prepositions (e.g., lives, visit, visit her home). Give one or two specific examples of topics you discuss to make the answer concrete.

예시: Yes, I still keep in touch with my primary school teacher, Fatima Khatun. She lives near my family home, so whenever I visit my hometown I often stop by her house. We usually chat about my future plans and my studies, and she gives me advice about balancing work and education.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence describing the main ways she helped you. Use specific examples and clear past/present verbs. Link the general help to a concrete instance and finish the thought—avoid trailing off.

예시: She helped me by boosting my confidence and teaching practical skills for my subject. For example, when I prepared a presentation for a university cultural event, I struggled with organization and timing. She reviewed my slides, suggested a clearer structure, and gave me rehearsal tips, which made my presentation much better.

제안: Start with a clear statement of your intention, then give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Use correct word forms and concise phrasing; avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because it is a respected profession and I enjoy helping others learn. For example, I want to advise students on career choices and guide them to improve their skills through study. Teaching would allow me to make a positive impact on many students' futures.

× Yes, uh, in my university I have a one female teacher whose name is Roshanar Begum.

✓ Yes, at my university I have a female teacher named Roshanar Begum.

The original used 'a one female' which is incorrect; use 'a' or 'one' but not both. Also 'in my university' is better as 'at my university', and 'whose name is' can be simplified to 'named'. Use consistent preposition and correct noun phrase order. Suggestion: Use 'a' before a singular countable noun and place adjectives before the noun (a female teacher). Use 'at' for institutions or locations.

× He's just quite efficient on their job and she's very honest on every student.

✓ She is quite efficient at her job and very honest with every student.

Pronoun forms were inconsistent and incorrect: 'He's' (he is) and 'their' do not agree with the female teacher. Use 'she' and possessive 'her'. Preposition 'on' is incorrect here: use 'at' for job and 'with' to describe interaction with students. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun agreement and choose correct prepositions: 'efficient at her job', 'honest with students'.

× She always try to try to teaching the different kind of knowledge student gave and, and sometimes they also friendly with us and I was we are very comfortable talking.

✓ She always tries to teach different kinds of knowledge that students gave, and sometimes she is also friendly with us, so we are very comfortable talking to her.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement ('She always tries' not 'try'); infinitive vs gerund ('to teach' instead of 'to teaching'); incorrect phrase order and plurality ('different kinds of knowledge'); unclear passive/relative clause corrected to 'that students gave'; pronoun agreement ('she' not 'they'); missing preposition 'to' after 'talking'. Suggestion: Match verb forms to subjects, use 'to' + base verb for infinitives, pluralize 'kind' when referring to multiple items, and include correct prepositions.

× Yes, I still chat with my primary school teacher.

✓ Yes, I still chat with my primary school teacher.

This sentence is acceptable in informal speech; however, for more natural present continuous about ongoing regular contact, 'I still keep in touch with my primary school teacher' or 'I still chat with my primary school teacher regularly' could be clearer. Suggestion: Use 'keep in touch' to express ongoing contact; use present simple for habitual actions.

× Her name is Fatima Khatun. Uh, actually she lived in my hometown next to my house.

✓ Her name is Fatima Khatun. Actually, she lives in my hometown next to my house.

Tense error: 'lived' (past) conflicts with present context; use present 'lives' to indicate she currently resides there. Keep pronoun 'she' consistent. Suggestion: Use present tense to describe current facts.

× So when I visit my hometown, I actually uh, frequently go to open their home and seeing each other.

✓ So when I visit my hometown, I frequently go to her home and we see each other.

'Go to open their home' is ungrammatical. Use 'go to her home' for visiting her house. 'Seeing each other' should be 'we see each other' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: Use possessive pronoun 'her' for singular female and form full clauses ('we see each other').

× After that we are talking lot of details like future plan and how to go my work study so.

✓ After that we talk about many details, such as future plans and how to balance work and study.

Original mixes tenses ('we are talking') and uses incorrect noun phrases ('lot of details', 'future plan', 'how to go my work study'). Use simple present 'we talk' for habitual actions, pluralize 'plans', and rephrase 'how to balance work and study' for clarity. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases and appropriate verbs for habitual conversations.

× Well, there another way my favorite teacher helped me like she give me a lot of enthusiasm, knowledge and how to be practical on my subject and how to umm.

✓ Well, another way my favorite teacher helped me was that she gave me a lot of enthusiasm and knowledge, and showed me how to be practical in my subject.

Missing 'was' after 'there' and tense errors: 'give' should be past 'gave' to match 'helped'. 'There another way' is incorrect; remove 'there' or use 'there was'. 'How to be practical on my subject' should be 'practical in my subject'. Suggestion: Ensure verb tenses are consistent and include necessary copula ('was') when introducing explanations.

× For example, recently I submit my presentation and university cultural section.

✓ For example, recently I submitted my presentation to the university cultural section.

Use past tense 'submitted' for a completed action. Preposition 'to' is needed to indicate the recipient 'the university cultural section'. Suggestion: Use past tense for completed recent actions and include correct prepositions.

× That time I suffer lot of details.

✓ At that time I suffered a lot and had many difficulties.

Use past tense 'suffered' to match the time phrase. 'Suffer lot of details' is ungrammatical; replace with 'suffered a lot' or 'had many difficulties'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns for problems ('difficulties', 'problems') and match tense to the time reference.

× So my favorite teacher always helped me out of this struggle. They learn me how to.

✓ So my favorite teacher always helped me through this struggle. She taught me how to do it.

Pronoun 'they' doesn't agree with singular 'my favorite teacher'; use 'she'. 'Learn me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taught me'. Also complete the clause 'how to do it'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and use correct verb pairs: 'teach someone' (teach me), 'learn' is intransitive or takes different structure.

× Yes, I in future I want to be a teacher because it's a very respectful profession.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to be a teacher because it is a very respected profession.

Redundant 'I' ('Yes, I in future I') and word choice: 'respectful profession' is incorrect; use 'respected profession'. Also add 'the' is optional; 'in the future' is the natural phrase. Suggestion: Remove redundancy and use correct adjective 'respected' to describe a profession.

× As I know everyone is quite respectable on teachers profession and it's very grateful to me that when I become a teacher I taught a lot of student and about their future and career suggest how to be improve their career through study.

✓ As far as I know, everyone respects the teaching profession, and I would be very grateful that when I become a teacher I can teach many students about their future and suggest how to improve their careers through study.

Many issues: 'respectable on teachers profession' should be 'respects the teaching profession'; tense and modality need correction ('I would be very grateful' and 'I can teach' instead of 'it's very grateful to me' and 'I taught'); pluralize 'students' and 'careers'; phrase 'suggest how to be improve their career' should be 'suggest how to improve their careers'. Suggestion: Use fixed expressions ('as far as I know', 'respect the profession'), correct modal verbs for hypothetical future ('would be', 'can'), and pluralize nouns when referring to multiple people.

× So it is.

✓ So it is.

Short response is acceptable but vague. Depending on context, a fuller sentence like 'So that is why I want to be a teacher' would be clearer. Suggestion: Expand vague closings to clearly state the speaker's conclusion.