Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't have a single favorite teacher, but I usually prefer math teachers because I enjoy math more than other subjects. Therefore, whoever teaches math tends to be my favorite.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Provide a clearer reason and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, I am not in touch with any of my primary school teachers because I was not very good academically, and I think they did not encourage me to keep in contact.

제안: Your answer is meaningful but incomplete and has some hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear conclusion.

예시: I had a math tutor who changed my life by helping me realize the importance of education and my own potential. Moreover, he encouraged me to use that potential effectively, which helped me become a more confident person.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and informal language. Avoid repeating words and use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'patience' instead of 'patient'). Also, try to express your ideas more politely and clearly.

예시: I would prefer not to become a teacher because I am not very fond of children, and I think teaching requires a lot of patience, which I lack. However, I agree that teaching can help you better understand the subject matter.

× whoever teach teaches math becomes my favorite teacher

✓ whoever teaches math becomes my favorite teacher

The subject 'whoever' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the subject.

× I'm not in touch with any of my school teacher

✓ I'm not in touch with any of my school teachers

The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'any of my school' implies more than one teacher.

× One of the reason is that I was not good in academics

✓ One of the reasons is that I was not good in academics

The phrase 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun 'reasons' because it refers to one item among multiple reasons.

× teacher also doesn't prefer me to be in touch with me

✓ teachers also don't prefer me to be in touch with them

The subject 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, the pronouns should be consistent: 'me' to 'them' to refer to teachers.

× made me utilize that potential in best way possible and, uh, making me the person who

✓ made me utilize that potential in the best way possible and, uh, made me the person who

The verb forms should be parallel; 'made' should be used instead of 'making' to maintain consistent past tense and parallel structure.

× I don't have a patient to teach also

✓ I don't have the patience to teach also

The word 'patient' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'patience' to express the ability to tolerate or endure.

× teaching do help you to process your process

✓ teaching does help you to process your progress

The singular subject 'teaching' requires the singular verb 'does'. Also, 'process your process' is unclear; likely intended 'process your progress'.