Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有語言錯誤和不自然的用法，例如「fabric feature」應為「favorite teacher」，以及語法錯誤如「he teach」應為「he teaches」。建議你使用簡單且正確的句子結構，並且避免重複。可以先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話說明原因，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I have a favorite teacher. He is my statistics teacher because he teaches the subject in a very systematic way, which helps us understand the material better.

제안: 你的回答有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，例如「others that don't have communication or, uh, things that relatively together」不清楚且不流暢。建議你用簡單明確的句子直接回答問題，並用連接詞說明原因，避免使用口語填充詞。

예시: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because we have lost contact over the years and I rarely communicate with them.

제안: 你的回答有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如「post graduated degree」應為「postgraduate degree」，「recommendation later」應為「recommendation letter」。建議你使用正確的詞彙和語法，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

예시: He helped me apply for a postgraduate degree by writing a recommendation letter. He was very kind and agreed to include whatever I wanted in the letter, so he helped me a lot.

제안: 你的回答中有矛盾（先說"definitely"，但後面說不想當老師），且語法錯誤如"kids now is"應為"kids now are"。建議你先明確表達意見，再用簡單句子說明原因，避免口語填充詞，並注意主謂一致。

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because children nowadays can be very naughty, and I don't think I have the patience to teach them for a long time.

× Yes, I do have a fabric feature.

✓ Yes, I do have a favorite teacher.

The word 'fabric feature' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or confusion. The correct phrase is 'favorite teacher'. This is not a grammar issue but a vocabulary error; however, since it affects meaning, it is corrected here.

× He is my statistic teacher who teach statistics of course.

✓ He is my statistics teacher who teaches statistics, of course.

The verb 'teach' should be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'who' referring to 'teacher'. Also, 'statistic teacher' should be 'statistics teacher' for correct noun usage.

× The reason that I like about him because he teach us in a systematically way and make us understand.

✓ The reason that I like him is because he teaches us in a systematic way and helps us understand.

'Systematically' is an adverb but the sentence requires an adjective 'systematic' to describe 'way'. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' for third person singular, and 'make us understand' should be 'helps us understand' for clarity and correctness.

× Oh, I don't really keep in touch with any of my teacher because, uh, though I'm a hard working person, but I, it's hard for me to keep in touch with others that don't have communication or, uh, things that relatively together.

✓ Oh, I don't really keep in touch with any of my teachers because, although I'm a hardworking person, it's hard for me to keep in touch with others who don't communicate or share similar interests.

'Any of my teacher' should be plural 'teachers'. The conjunctions 'though' and 'but' are incorrectly combined; use 'although' or 'but' alone. 'Others that don't have communication' is awkward; 'others who don't communicate' is better. 'Things that relatively together' is unclear; 'share similar interests' is clearer.

× He helped me to apply for post graduated degree.

✓ He helped me to apply for a postgraduate degree.

'Post graduated degree' is incorrect; the correct term is 'postgraduate degree'. Also, 'apply for' is correct, and 'helped' is correctly in past tense.

× I asked him to write a recommendation later for me and he's he was really kind that whatever I would like him to say and he agrees.

✓ I asked him to write a recommendation letter for me and he was really kind; whatever I wanted him to say, he agreed.

'Recommendation later' should be 'recommendation letter'. The phrase 'he's he was' is redundant; use 'he was'. 'Would like' should be past tense 'wanted' to match past context. 'He agrees' should be 'he agreed' for past tense consistency.

× Oh definitely, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because the kids now is getting naughty all the time and I can't bear to stay with them for more than one hour I would say.

✓ Oh definitely, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because the kids now are getting naughty all the time and I can't bear to stay with them for more than one hour, I would say.

'Kids now is' should be 'kids now are' for subject-verb agreement. The modal verb 'can't' is correctly used. A comma is added before 'I would say' for clarity.

× And uh, I, my personality isn't that good to be a teacher.

✓ And uh, my personality isn't suited to be a teacher.

'I, my personality' is redundant; 'my personality' alone is sufficient. 'Isn't that good to be a teacher' is awkward; 'isn't suited to be a teacher' is more natural.