Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors such as 'were was' and awkward phrasing like 'math subject'. To improve, provide a complete and clear response with correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and focus on relevant details about why she was your favourite teacher.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher was Harinder Kaur, who taught me mathematics in 10th grade. She was very patient and explained difficult concepts clearly, which helped me enjoy the subject more.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler phrases like 'to be honest' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because it has been a long time since I last saw them, so I haven't had the opportunity to reconnect.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing such as 'Link As I as earlier said' and 'she always ready'. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words properly. Provide specific examples of how she helped you.

예시: As I mentioned earlier, my math teacher was my favourite because she was always ready to help me, especially during exam periods and challenging times, by explaining problems patiently and encouraging me.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some hesitations and informal fillers like 'uh' and 'so yeah'. To improve, speak confidently and use complete sentences. Also, clarify whose dream you want to fulfill and why.

예시: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I have dreamed of this since childhood, and I hope to fulfill my father's dream of seeing me in this profession.

× that time one of my teachers were was my favorite

✓ that time one of my teachers was my favorite

The subject 'one of my teachers' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× she used to teach us math subject

✓ she used to teach us the math subject

When referring to a specific subject, the definite article 'the' is required before 'math subject'.

× So she was very beautiful and she had a.

✓ So she was very beautiful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'she had a.' which is incomplete and causes a sentence structure error. It should be completed or removed.

× because it was long time

✓ because it was a long time

The phrase 'long time' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I didn't get a chance to connect with them

✓ I didn't get a chance to connect to them

The correct preposition after 'connect' when referring to people is 'to' rather than 'with'.

× Link As I as earlier said, one of my math teacher was my favorite teacher.

✓ As I said earlier, one of my math teachers was my favorite teacher.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'Link As I as earlier said'. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'one of my'.

× She always ready to help me during my exam time

✓ She was always ready to help me during my exam time

The verb 'was' is missing before 'always ready'. Also, 'exam time' is acceptable but 'the exam time' would be better.

× during my exam period and other difficult time

✓ during my exam period and other difficult times

The phrase 'other difficult time' should be plural 'times' to match 'period' and to be grammatically correct.

× in future I want to be a teacher

✓ in the future I want to be a teacher

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct.

× because I had dream from my childhood

✓ because I have had a dream since my childhood

The present perfect tense 'have had' is appropriate to express a dream continuing from childhood to now. Also, 'a dream' requires the article 'a' and 'since' is better than 'from' for time expressions.

× one day I will fulfill my dad dream

✓ one day I will fulfill my dad's dream

The possessive form 'dad's' is required to indicate that the dream belongs to the dad.