Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和单复数的一致性，避免使用不准确的词汇，如“pay you know with customer”。同时，回答应更简洁自然，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is Mr. Wong, my Chinese teacher. He always encouraged me and gave me useful advice to improve my exam performance. He is also very strict, which helped me stay focused in class.

제안: 回答表达不流畅，语法和词汇使用不当，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达清晰具体。

예시: No, I am not. I am very busy with my exams and assignments at university, so I don't have time to meet my primary school teacher.

제안: 回答内容混乱，表达不清楚，缺乏具体细节。建议先明确主题句，然后用具体例子支持观点，使用连词使表达连贯。

예시: My favorite teacher helped me by giving study advice when I felt confused. For example, he taught me effective ways to prepare for exams, which made me more confident.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和词汇使用错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句表达观点，避免使用错误词汇，增加具体理由。

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher because it is hard work. Teachers have to prepare many lessons and help students who find learning difficult. They also need to check homework regularly, which can be tiring.

× My favorite teacher is my Chinese teachers, Mr. Wong.

✓ My favorite teacher is my Chinese teacher, Mr. Wong.

这里“teacher”是单数，表示“我最喜欢的老师”，但原句用了复数“teachers”，与主语不符。应使用单数形式。

× He always encouraged me and gave me some advice on my Chinese exam performance.

✓ He always encourages me and gives me some advice on my Chinese exam performance.

句中“always”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× Additional, he is a firm teacher because he always pay you know with customer and me in the lesson.

✓ Additionally, he is a firm teacher because he always pays attention to you and me in the lesson.

“Additional”用作副词应为“Additionally”，且句子中“pay you know with customer”表达不清，应改为“pays attention to you and me”。

× he always pay you know with customer and me in the lesson.

✓ he always pays attention to you and me in the lesson.

主语是第三人称单数“he”，谓语动词应加-s，故“pay”应改为“pays”。

× No, because nowadays I quite busy a little prepare a lot of exam assignments in my associate degree life.

✓ No, because nowadays I am quite busy preparing a lot of exam assignments in my associate degree life.

“busy”后应接动词-ing形式表示正在进行的动作，且缺少系动词“am”。

× Therefore I do not have time to go to outside and meet my teacher in secret my in primary school.

✓ Therefore I do not have time to go outside and meet my teacher from primary school.

“go to outside”应改为“go outside”，且“in secret my in primary school”表达混乱，应改为“from primary school”。

× As far as I concerned that I think teachers need to give some support on our study because some of the classes may feel helpless on their aviation, for example, they did not they do not know how to study or to.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I think teachers need to give some support in our study because some students may feel helpless in their learning; for example, they do not know how to study.

句子缺少“am”导致结构不完整，且“classes”应为“students”，“aviation”用词错误，应为“learning”。

× I wish to do some relation and teacher is a good way to get some advice.

✓ I wish to build some relationships and teachers are a good way to get some advice.

“do some relation”表达错误，应为“build some relationships”，且“teacher”应为复数“teachers”。

× No, because adventure is a hard work for me.

✓ No, because teaching is hard work for me.

“adventure”与上下文不符，应为“teaching”，且“hard work”不可数，前面不加冠词“a”。

× Uh, they need to prepare a lot of information on teaching.

✓ Uh, teachers need to prepare a lot of information for teaching.

“they”指代不明，应明确为“teachers”。

× Also, uh, they need to find some way to attain some of the students who felt feel borrowed in the class.

✓ Also, they need to find some way to help some of the students who feel bored in the class.

“attain”用词错误，应为“help”，“felt feel borrowed”应为“feel bored”。

× Also you need to and check their homework and *** assignment on the class.

✓ Also, you need to check their homework and assignments in the class.

“and”多余且“***”不明，应删除，且“assignment”应为复数“assignments”。

× It's so truffle.

✓ It's so tough.

“truffle”是“松露”，应为“tough”表示“困难的”。