Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'at the same times' nên là 'at the same time', và 'he kind' nên là 'he is kind'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối 'He's often called me his daughters' không chính xác về ngữ pháp và ý nghĩa, nên sửa lại để rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I do. My favourite teacher is my university professor because he is very clever and at the same time kind and approachable. He often gives compliments and encouragement to students, which makes me feel special. For example, he sometimes calls me his daughter, which shows how close we are.

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên như 'and back then we were too young and to exchange phone numbers' nên sửa lại cho đúng cấu trúc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

예시: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher. Since it was a long time ago, we were too young to exchange phone numbers or use social media. Moreover, I moved to a different area, so it has been difficult to keep in contact.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác, ví dụ như 'help me in many important way' nên là 'helped me in many important ways', 'act as a mentors' nên là 'acts as a mentor', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động đã xảy ra và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me in many important ways throughout my life. He taught me the basics of architecture and acted as a mentor by giving me valuable advice and guidance. Moreover, he encouraged me to follow my dreams, which motivated me to work hard and stay focused.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có ý kiến cá nhân, nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'becoming a teachers' nên là 'becoming a teacher', 'teachings can be' nên là 'teaching can be', và câu cuối 'teachings is important and reward' nên là 'teaching is important and rewarding'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

예시: Yes, I have thought about becoming a teacher in the future. I think teaching can be a tedious job because you have to repeat the same lessons many times, sometimes to over 100 students, which might become boring. However, I also believe teaching is important and rewarding.

× he's really clever and at the same times he kind and approachable

✓ he's really clever and at the same time he is kind and approachable

The phrase 'at the same times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at the same time'. Also, 'he kind' is missing the verb 'is'. The sentence needs 'he is kind' to be grammatically correct.

× He's often called me his daughters, which make me feel pretty special

✓ He often calls me his daughter, which makes me feel pretty special

The pronoun 'He's' (He is) is incorrect here; it should be 'He' as the subject. Also, 'called' should be in present tense 'calls' to match the habitual action. 'Daughters' should be singular 'daughter' to agree with 'me'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which'.

× I don't maintain contact with my primary school teacher

✓ I don't maintain contact with my primary school teacher

This sentence is correct; no preposition error found.

× It's been a long time since I started primary school and back then we were too young and to exchange phone numbers or use social media

✓ It's been a long time since I started primary school, and back then we were too young to exchange phone numbers or use social media

The phrase 'and to exchange' is incorrect; the conjunction 'and' should connect two clauses properly. The phrase 'and to exchange' should be 'to exchange' without 'and' to maintain sentence structure.

× Besides, I have to move to a different area so it's difficult to stay in touch

✓ Besides, I had to move to a different area so it was difficult to stay in touch

The action of moving happened in the past, so 'have to move' should be in past tense 'had to move'. Similarly, 'it's difficult' should be 'it was difficult' to maintain past tense consistency.

× My favorite teachers help me in many important way throughout my life

✓ My favorite teacher helps me in many important ways throughout my life

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match the singular subject. 'Help' should be 'helps' for third person singular. 'Way' should be plural 'ways' to agree with 'many'.

× He taught me the basics of architectures and also act as a mentors by giving me valuable advice and guidance

✓ He taught me the basics of architecture and also acts as a mentor by giving me valuable advice and guidance

'Architectures' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'architecture' (uncountable). 'Act' should be 'acts' to agree with singular subject 'He'. 'Mentors' should be singular 'mentor' to agree with 'a'.

× How? Moreover, he's also encouraged me to follow my dreams would motivate me to work hard and stay focused

✓ Moreover, he has also encouraged me to follow my dreams, which motivates me to work hard and stay focused

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'How?' is unnecessary. 'Would motivate me' is incorrect here; it should be 'which motivates me' to connect the ideas properly.

× I used to have various thoughts about becoming a teachers because I think teachings can be a tedious job

✓ I used to have various thoughts about becoming a teacher because I think teaching can be a tedious job

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' after 'becoming a'. 'Teachings' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'teaching' (uncountable).

× You have to repeat the same lesson many times, sometimes to over 100 students, which might become boring

✓ You have to repeat the same lesson many times, sometimes to over 100 students, which might become boring

This sentence is correct; no quantifier error found.

× However, I also believe teachings is important and reward

✓ However, I also believe teaching is important and rewarding

'Teachings' is incorrect; 'teaching' is uncountable. 'Reward' should be 'rewarding' to function as an adjective describing 'teaching'.