Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details without repeating the same idea. Also, avoid grammatical errors and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher is my homeroom teacher from the high school I transferred to when I was 19. I chose that school because it was closer to my home, which made daily travel easier. He was very kind and supportive, which helped me settle in quickly.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain reasons or details. Avoid vague phrases like 'maybe' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because he changed his career path. He went to Busan University Law School to study law, so we lost contact after that.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain specifically how the teacher helped you, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me a lot when I transferred to a new school. At first, I found it difficult to adapt, but he supported me by giving advice and encouragement, which made the transition much easier.

제안: Your answer is understandable but awkwardly phrased. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences. Explain your reasons logically with linking words and avoid vague expressions like 'versus teaching skill'.

예시: No, I do not want to be a teacher because it requires many skills, such as effective teaching, communicating with students, and collaborating with colleagues. I believe I do not have these talents.

× When I was 19 years old, I changed my high school because I want to go near my home.

✓ When I was 19 years old, I changed my high school because I wanted to go near my home.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' and 'changed' with present tense 'want'. The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to maintain consistent past tense narrative.

× I want to go home that located in near my home.

✓ I wanted to go to a home that is located near my home.

The phrase 'located in near my home' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'near' without 'in'. Also, 'go home that located' is ungrammatical; it should be 'go to a home that is located'.

× So I don't meet, I didn't meet him until now.

✓ So I haven't met him until now.

The phrase 'I don't meet' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'haven't met' is appropriate to express an action that has not happened up to the present.

× No, because he stopped his teacher work and he transferred his job.

✓ No, because he stopped his teaching work and transferred his job.

The phrase 'stopped his teacher work' is incorrect; 'teaching work' is the correct noun phrase. Also, 'transferred his job' is awkward; 'changed his job' or 'transferred to another job' would be better, but 'transferred his job' is acceptable here as a correction focusing on verb tense.

× He studied law of Korea.

✓ He studied Korean law.

The phrase 'law of Korea' is awkward; 'Korean law' is the correct adjective-noun order. Also, 'studied' is correct past tense here.

× My favorite teacher helped me construct my worry and trouble.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me deal with my worries and troubles.

The phrase 'construct my worry and trouble' is incorrect. The verb 'construct' is not used with 'worry and trouble'. The correct phrase is 'deal with my worries and troubles'.

× That is I transport to new school so I don't.

✓ That is, I transferred to a new school so I didn't.

The verb 'transport' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'transfer'. Also, 'I don't' is incomplete and inconsistent with past tense narrative; it should be 'I didn't'.

× I didn't adapt that new school but he helped me to adapt my school life so I can adapt.

✓ I didn't adapt to that new school, but he helped me to adapt to school life so I could adapt.

The verb 'adapt' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'I can adapt' should be past tense 'I could adapt' to maintain tense consistency.

× No, because I think teacher has many skills that is versus teaching skill and talking with talking to students and interacting with other teachers, children.

✓ No, because I think a teacher has many skills, such as teaching skills, talking to students, and interacting with other teachers and children.

The sentence has several issues: missing article 'a' before 'teacher', incorrect phrase 'that is versus' which should be 'such as', and awkward repetition 'talking with talking to'. The corrected sentence uses proper articles and clearer phrasing.

× So it's talent, but I don't have it.

✓ So it's a talent, but I don't have it.

The phrase 'it's talent' is missing the article 'a' before 'talent'. Adding 'a' corrects the noun phrase. The pronoun 'it' is correctly used here.