Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you have a favourite teacher?
수험생
Yeah, I do have a favorite teacher. She's my primary school teacher and she's very kind and patient to all of us. I really miss her because I still remember she encouraged me when I faced danger. But it is pity that we haven't keep in touch.
시험관
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
수험생
No, unfortunately I haven't keep in touch with my primary teacher. I still remember the last time we met together is that I graduated from primary school. A long time passed.
시험관
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
수험생
Writing. I still remember when I first started to write words, she told me how to write gradually and step by step. Then this behavior still helped me to have a good writer.
시험관
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
수험생
Actually, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I think that is a very challenging job for me. I don't want you to pay too much attention for carrying the child. Besides, I have another jobs and plans in my future life.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't keep”应为“haven't kept”，且表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时避免冗余，回答应更自然流畅。
예시: Yes, I have a favourite teacher from primary school. She was very kind and patient with all of us. I miss her a lot because she encouraged me when I faced difficulties. Unfortunately, we have lost contact over the years.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“haven't keep”应为“haven't kept”，“the last time we met together is that”表达不自然。建议加强时态和句型的准确性，使用更自然的表达方式。
예시: No, unfortunately I haven't kept in touch with my primary school teacher. The last time we met was at my primary school graduation, which was a long time ago.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构简单且有语法错误，如“helped me to have a good writer”应为“helped me become a good writer”。建议丰富内容，使用连贯的句子和正确的表达。
예시: My favourite teacher helped me improve my writing skills. When I first started learning to write, she guided me step by step, which greatly improved my ability and helped me become a good writer.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“don't want you to pay too much attention for carrying the child”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更准确的表达，清楚说明原因，并避免语法错误。
예시: Actually, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I think it's a very challenging job. I prefer to pursue other careers and have different plans for my life.
문법
× But it is pity that we haven't keep in touch.
✓ But it is a pity that we haven't kept in touch.
这里使用了现在完成时态（haven't kept），动词keep的过去分词是kept，原句中使用了keep，时态错误。应使用过去分词kept来构成完成时态。
× No, unfortunately I haven't keep in touch with my primary teacher.
✓ No, unfortunately I haven't kept in touch with my primary teacher.
同样是现在完成时态，动词keep的过去分词是kept，原句中使用了keep，时态错误。应使用过去分词kept。
× I still remember the last time we met together is that I graduated from primary school.
✓ I still remember the last time we met was when I graduated from primary school.
这里描述过去的事件，应该用过去时态，原句中用的是现在时is，时态错误。应使用过去时was。
× Then this behavior still helped me to have a good writer.
✓ Then this behavior still helped me to become a good writer.
原句中“have a good writer”结构不正确，应该用动词become表示“成为一个好作家”，句子结构错误。
× I don't want you to pay too much attention for carrying the child.
✓ I don't want to pay too much attention to taking care of children.
动词pay attention后应接介词to，原句用错了介词for；另外，carry the child表达不自然，改为take care of children更符合语境。
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