Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I do have a favourite teacher. In my opinion, teachers play a crucial role in students' lives because they guide us to perform well academically. Moreover, in India, teachers are often respected like parents or even regarded as gods, which shows their importance.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, whose name is Kanchan. Since she lives near my home, it is easy for me to meet her occasionally, and she remains my favourite teacher.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to make your answer more effective.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me especially during exam time. When I was not well prepared, she gave me extra classes and provided important notes, which helped me pass my exams successfully.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and use linking words to explain your reasons.

예시: No, I do not want to be a teacher in the future because I believe it requires a lot of patience, which I may not have. Instead, I want to start my own business since I prefer to be independent. However, if I get a chance, I would like to teach my own children.

× Well in my view teacher play a crucial role in students life or they help the student how to perform well and they also like as a parents.

✓ Well in my view teachers play a crucial role in students' lives; they help the students how to perform well and they are also like parents.

The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because it refers to all teachers in general. 'Students life' should be 'students' lives' to show possession and plural form. 'The student' should be 'the students' to match plural context. 'Like as a parents' is incorrect; it should be 'like parents' without 'as' and 'a' because 'parents' is plural.

× Teacher is a crucial role in every student's life and in India a teacher also treat as a God.

✓ A teacher is a crucial figure in every student's life and in India a teacher is also treated as a God.

'Teacher is a crucial role' is incorrect; 'teacher' is singular and 'role' is a noun, so it should be 'a teacher is a crucial figure' or 'plays a crucial role'. Also, 'a teacher also treat' should be 'a teacher is also treated' to match singular subject and passive voice.

× Yeah, so I I still in touch with my primary school teacher and her name was I I remember her name was Kanchan and she's my favorite teacher still now.

✓ Yeah, so I am still in touch with my primary school teacher and I remember her name was Kanchan and she's still my favorite teacher.

The phrase 'I still in touch' is missing the verb 'am' for present tense. 'Still now' is awkward; 'still' alone suffices to indicate continuity.

× And because she live behind my home, that's why I still in touch with my.

✓ And because she lives behind my home, that's why I am still in touch with her.

'She live' should be 'she lives' to agree with third person singular. 'I still in touch' needs 'am' to form present tense. The sentence ends abruptly; 'with my' should be 'with her' to refer to the teacher.

× When I am not prepared about my exams and my class teacher help me by giving extra classes and providing importance notes related to my subject that help me to past in my exam.

✓ When I was not prepared for my exams, my class teacher helped me by giving extra classes and providing important notes related to my subject that helped me to pass my exam.

The sentence refers to a past event, so 'am not prepared' should be 'was not prepared' (past tense). 'Help' should be 'helped' to match past tense. 'Importance notes' should be 'important notes' (adjective use). 'Help me to past' should be 'helped me to pass' (correct verb and past tense). 'Prepared about' should be 'prepared for' (correct preposition).

× No, I did not want to be a teacher in my life because I think it is a more patience job that I have not well I want to start my own business because I would not like to work under someone but if I get chance to be a teacher to teach my child.

✓ No, I do not want to be a teacher in my life because I think it is a job that requires more patience, which I do not have. I want to start my own business because I would not like to work under someone, but if I get a chance, I would like to be a teacher to teach my child.

'Did not want' is past tense; since the context is present desire, 'do not want' is correct. 'More patience job' should be 'a job that requires more patience' (correct adjective and structure). 'That I have not well' is incorrect; it should be 'which I do not have'. 'Would not like' is correct for polite refusal. 'If I get chance' needs article 'a' and conditional structure 'I would like' to express willingness.