Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "in in" and phrases like "like maths teacher". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about why he was a great teacher.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher was my middle school math teacher, Mr. Devinder. He was very polite and always willing to help us improve. Whenever we scored low, he offered extra classes to support us. I really appreciated his dedication and still miss his guidance.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more structured and natural. Avoid filler words like "like" and clarify the frequency of contact with linking words. Also, be consistent with singular/plural pronouns and provide more specific details about your communication.

예시: Yes, my primary school teacher moved to Canada about two years ago, and we have kept in touch through Instagram. We communicate regularly, often by replying to each other's stories. This helps us stay connected despite the distance.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repetition of "math" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples of the strategies he recommended.

예시: I struggled with math, so whenever I faced difficulties, my teacher offered extra classes and suggested effective problem-solving strategies. For example, he taught me how to break down complex problems into smaller steps, which made them easier to solve.

제안: Your answer is honest but could be more polished and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid informal phrases like "a little afraid". Also, expand slightly on how you might overcome your fear to show reflection.

예시: Yes, I would love to be a teacher in the future. Since I am mainly interested in biology, I would like to become a science teacher. However, I am somewhat nervous about public speaking, so I plan to work on my confidence to become an effective educator.

× Yes, when I was a kid in in middle school we had a teacher like maths teacher, his name is Devinder Sir.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid in middle school, we had a teacher, like a maths teacher, his name is Devinder Sir.

The phrase 'in in middle school' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Also, 'like maths teacher' is missing an article 'a' before 'maths teacher'. The correct preposition usage and article improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Every time we have low score he would help us by giving extra classes.

✓ Every time we had low scores, he would help us by giving extra classes.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past habitual action 'would help'. To maintain tense consistency, 'have' should be in past tense 'had'. Also, 'low score' should be plural 'low scores' to match the context.

× Yes, he also came to Canada like 2 years ago and we have been in touch through Instagram.

✓ Yes, he also came to Canada about 2 years ago and we have been in touch through Instagram.

The word 'like' is incorrectly used as a preposition to indicate time. The correct word is 'about' to express approximation in time.

× More like regular basis, but sometimes I do reply to their stories or like their stories.

✓ More on a regular basis, but sometimes I do reply to his stories or like his stories.

The phrase 'More like regular basis' is incorrect; it should be 'More on a regular basis'. Also, 'their' is a plural pronoun, but the subject is singular 'he', so 'his' should be used.

× I was quite weak in math, so every time I had I was stuck in some problem related to math.

✓ I was quite weak in math, so every time I was stuck in some problem related to math.

The phrase 'I had I was stuck' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'I was stuck' to indicate past continuous state.

× He would offer me help by giving extra classes or recommending some good strategies to solve the problems easily.

✓ He would offer me help by giving extra classes or by recommending some good strategies to solve the problems easily.

To maintain parallel structure, 'by' should be used before both gerunds 'giving' and 'recommending'.

× Yes, I would love to. So my main interest is in biology so I would definitely be a science teacher, but I am little afraid of public speaking so I don't know if I can be a good teacher.

✓ Yes, I would love to. So my main interest is in biology, so I would definitely be a science teacher, but I am a little afraid of public speaking, so I don't know if I can be a good teacher.

The phrase 'I am little afraid' is missing the article 'a' before 'little'. Also, commas are added for better sentence flow and clarity.