Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I do have"; simply say "I have." Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a bit more specific detail about why he is your favourite teacher.

예시: Yes, I have a favourite teacher named Mr. Siddheshwar who teaches artificial intelligence in my third year. He excels in his work and, because of his futuristic thinking, he inspires me to learn more about emerging technologies.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "I and he has helped me" should be corrected. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide more specific details about your memories.

예시: No, I am not currently in touch with my primary school teacher, but I have fond memories of him because he was very kind and helped me understand mathematics clearly.

제안: The answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like "He is a positive aura of him." Use linking words properly and correct sentence structures. Be specific about how he helped you academically and personally.

예시: My favourite teacher, Mr. Siddheshwar, is a very charismatic person. Not only has he helped me excel academically, but he has also taught me to be patient and communicate effectively with others.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, "tackle small children's very peacefully" is awkward. Use linking words and be more specific about why you want to teach.

예시: Yes, I would like to be a mathematics teacher in the future because I find teaching enjoyable. Moreover, I believe I can patiently guide young children and help them develop a strong foundation in maths.

× He teaches me artificial intelligence in my third year of college.

✓ He teaches me artificial intelligence in my third year of college.

No singular/plural error detected in this sentence.

× He's very adorable and I and he has helped me to learn mathematics.

✓ He's very adorable and he has helped me to learn mathematics.

The phrase 'I and he has helped' is incorrect because 'I and he' is plural and should use 'have helped' instead of 'has helped'. Also, the phrase is awkward and redundant. Correcting to 'he has helped me' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× My favorite teacher Mr. Siddheshwar is very charismatic person.

✓ My favorite teacher Mr. Siddheshwar is a very charismatic person.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very charismatic person'. Without the article, the noun phrase is incorrect. Adding 'a' corrects the singular noun phrase.

× He is a positive aura of him.

✓ He has a positive aura.

The original sentence is incorrect and awkward. 'He is a positive aura of him' is not proper English. The intended meaning is that he possesses a positive aura, so 'He has a positive aura' is the correct form.

× He although he has helped me in my academic curriculum beside it has also helped me to deal with other people patiently.

✓ Although he has helped me in my academic curriculum, he has also helped me to deal with other people patiently.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and structure. 'He although he' is redundant and 'beside it' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'Although' at the start and removes 'beside it' to improve clarity and grammar.

× I think that I will be able to tackle small children's very peacefully.

✓ I think that I will be able to tackle small children very peacefully.

The phrase 'small children's' is incorrect because 'children's' is possessive and unnecessary here. The correct plural noun 'children' should be used without the possessive apostrophe to indicate the object of 'tackle'.