Teacher— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免冗长和重复。可以尝试用更简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher is my chemistry teacher. He is very professional and patient. Whenever I struggle with something, he is always there to help me and give advice on how to solve problems.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，逻辑不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，明确说明原因，避免模糊和不连贯。

예시: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher. At that time, I was not doing well in class, so I think they did not pay much attention to me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意动词时态和词汇选择，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: My favourite teacher always used real-life examples to explain difficult concepts. This made the lessons more interesting and helped me understand complex ideas more quickly.

제안: 回答表达不连贯，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I am not a morning person. I usually stay up late, so waking up early would be very difficult for me.

× Yes I have my favorite teacher is my chemistry teacher.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher; he is my chemistry teacher.

句中缺少冠词，'favorite teacher'前应加不定冠词'a'，表示泛指一个喜欢的老师。

× He is very professional and patience will I struggling ways anything he always there to lend my hand and giving me some advice to solve the questions.

✓ He is very professional and patient. Whenever I struggle with anything, he is always there to lend me a hand and give me some advice to solve the questions.

'patience'是名词，需用形容词'patient'来形容人；句子结构混乱，需分句表达；'will I struggling ways anything'语法错误，应改为'Whenever I struggle with anything'；'lend my hand'应为'lend me a hand'；'giving'应改为'give'，保持动词形式一致。

× No, actually I'm not keep touch with my primary school teacher because when that time I'm not good at gate high course in my class so they may don't want to pay a lot of attention on me.

✓ No, actually I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because at that time I wasn't good at getting high scores in my class, so they may not have wanted to pay much attention to me.

'keep touch'应为'in touch'；'when that time'应为'at that time'；'I'm not good at gate high course'语法错误，改为'I wasn't good at getting high scores'；'they may don't want'应为'they may not have wanted'，时态和助动词错误；'pay a lot of attention on me'应为'pay much attention to me'。

× My favorite teacher always use found examples to explain difficult complexed, which makes the lessons more interesting and easier to understand because those days I was able to grasp complex ideas more quickly.

✓ My favorite teacher always uses found examples to explain difficult concepts, which makes the lessons more interesting and easier to understand because those days I was able to grasp complex ideas more quickly.

'use'应为第三人称单数形式'uses'；'difficult complexed'应为'difficult concepts'，'complexed'不是正确的形容词。

× No, actually I'm not a morning person, so I can. Be more energetic in the morning. However I tend to burn the midnight oil so I think get up early. It's very difficult for me.

✓ No, actually I'm not a morning person, so I can't be more energetic in the morning. However, I tend to burn the midnight oil, so I think getting up early is very difficult for me.

'I can. Be'断句错误，应连写为'can't be'；'I think get up early'语法错误，应为'I think getting up early'，动名词作主语；句子缺少逗号，需加以分隔。