Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence about how busy the roads usually are, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unrelated or confusing statements (e.g. “I hate it very much when it is in Russia” is unclear and off-topic). Use correct word forms and prepositions (e.g. "rush hour", "suburban area").

예시: Usually the roads near my home are not very busy because I live in a suburban area. However, during rush hour they become quite congested, especially near the main intersections, which makes commuting slow.

제안: Answer clearly and give specific reasons. Use correct grammar (e.g. "it is unsafe for pedestrians") and precise vocabulary ("crossings" or "crosswalks" instead of "cross pots"). Add one example or consequence to support your idea and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, people do cross the road, but it is often unsafe for pedestrians because traffic lights are unreliable and many crosswalks are damaged. For example, some crossings lack signals, so pedestrians must wait a long time or risk crossing in heavy traffic.

제안: Give a direct evaluation first, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use correct noun forms and articles ("infrastructure" not "infrastructures", "not well maintained"). Avoid broad claims without evidence — provide one concrete example (potholes, broken drains, etc.).

예시: Overall, the roads in my city are poorly maintained. For instance, many streets have potholes and damaged drainage, which I believe is due to decreased investment in maintenance by local authorities.

제안: Provide a clear recommendation and one or two specific actions the government could take. Use correct phrase forms ("regulate vehicle registration" or "enforce traffic regulations") and link ideas (e.g. "for example", "such as"). Keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, definitely. The government should invest more in repairing roads and improving drainage; for example, they could schedule regular resurfacing and fix potholes. They should also enforce vehicle registration and traffic regulations to reduce congestion and unsafe driving.

× Not quite bustling because I live in suburban area, but if it is rushed hour the road may be more busy and congested. I hate it very much when it is in Russia.

✓ Not very bustling because I live in a suburban area, but during rush hour the roads may be busier and more congested. I hate it very much when that happens.

Original has several sentence structure and word-choice problems: 'in suburban area' needs an article and adjective order -> 'a suburban area' (article error and noun phrase structure). 'If it is rushed hour' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'during rush hour' (preposition/time expression). 'the road may be more busy' uses comparative form incorrectly and singular/plural mismatch; use comparative adverb/adjective 'busier' and plural 'roads' to match general meaning (subject-verb agreement and plural). 'I hate it very much when it is in Russia' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended 'when that happens' or 'when it is like that' -> clarified as 'I hate it very much when that happens' (sentence structure and pronoun reference). Suggestions: use correct articles ('a'), time expressions ('during rush hour'), correct comparative forms ('busier'), ensure number agreement between subject and noun, and use clear pronoun references.

× Yes, but it is in safe for pedestrians because the lights are not good enough and the cross pots are not quite maintained.

✓ Yes, but it is unsafe for pedestrians because the lights are not good enough and the crosswalks are not well maintained.

'in safe' is incorrect preposition and adjective form; use 'unsafe' or 'not safe'. 'cross pots' is incorrect word choice; correct term is 'crosswalks' or 'crossings'. 'not quite maintained' is awkward; use 'not well maintained' or 'poorly maintained'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions/adjectival forms ('unsafe'), choose the proper noun ('crosswalks'), and use natural collocations ('well maintained').

× I think Thailand's infrastructures are not good maintained because of decreased investment in maintenance.

✓ I think Thailand's infrastructure is not well maintained because of decreased investment in maintenance.

'infrastructures' is usually uncountable as 'infrastructure' when referring to a nation's systems; using plural is unnatural (quantifier/article error). 'not good maintained' is ungrammatical; correct collocation is 'not well maintained' (adverb + past participle). Suggestions: use the uncountable form 'infrastructure', place 'well' before 'maintained', and keep subject-verb agreement with singular uncountable noun ('is not').

× Yes, definitely. Currently our roads are not well maintained. I think government should invest more in infrastructure and should take action in regulate registration.

✓ Yes, definitely. Currently our roads are not well maintained. I think the government should invest more in infrastructure and should take action to regulate registration.

Missing definite article before 'government' -> 'the government' (article error). 'take action in regulate registration' uses incorrect verb pattern; correct structure is 'take action to regulate registration' (use infinitive 'to regulate'). Modal usage 'should' is acceptable but needs correct accompanying verbs and articles. Suggestions: include definite article 'the', use correct verb patterns after 'take action' ('to' + base verb), and keep consistent modal constructions.