Relax— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, avoid repeating similar ideas and connect your thoughts smoothly.

예시: Recently, I have been camping with my friend on top of the mountains. The beautiful scenery and fresh air help us feel relaxed and forget about stress.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct phrases and add more details to make your answer clearer and more natural. For example, use 'go outdoors' instead of 'go out door' and explain what you like doing together.

예시: I usually relax outdoors with my friend because we enjoy similar activities like hiking and chatting.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain why music is relaxing and avoid confusing expressions like 'selling some of my favorite music in my top please'.

예시: Yes, I think listening to music is very relaxing, especially when I listen to my favorite songs because they help me feel calm and happy.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid unclear words like 'Buena, fear stress' and use linking words to connect your activities for relaxation.

예시: To relax, I usually listen to music or go to the gym to exercise. Listening to music helps me feel calm and peaceful mentally.

× The beautiful sceneries make us feel good and relaxing the fresh air.

✓ The beautiful scenery makes us feel good and relaxed by the fresh air.

The word 'sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'relaxing the fresh air' is incorrect; it should be 'relaxed by the fresh air' to correctly describe the feeling caused by the air.

× And beautiful view of nature's made us forget about stress.

✓ And the beautiful view of nature made us forget about stress.

The phrase 'beautiful view' needs the definite article 'the' and 'nature's' is incorrect here; it should be 'nature'. Also, 'made' is correct past tense.

× I usually go out door with my friend because we like the same things.

✓ I usually go outdoors with my friend because we like the same things.

The word 'out door' should be 'outdoors' as one word to indicate outside activities.

× Yes, I do listen to music is feeling relaxed, especially listening to the music that we like.

✓ Yes, I do listen to music to feel relaxed, especially music that we like.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'listen to music is feeling relaxed' should be 'listen to music to feel relaxed' to express purpose.

× I've been selling some of my favorite music in my top please.

✓ I've been saving some of my favorite music in my top playlist.

The phrase 'selling some of my favorite music in my top please' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'saving' and 'top playlist'.

× Buena, fear stress.

✓ Well, to relieve stress.

The phrase 'Buena, fear stress' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; likely intended to say 'Well, to relieve stress'.

× I usually listens to music.

✓ I usually listen to music.

The subject 'I' requires the base form 'listen' not 'listens' which is for third person singular.

× Oh go to gym or do some exercise to feel relaxed.

✓ I go to the gym or do some exercise to feel relaxed.

The phrase 'Oh go to gym' is missing the subject and the article 'the' before 'gym'.

× Mostly I listened to music because I'm so mentally feel come. And peaceful.

✓ Mostly I listen to music because I feel mentally calm and peaceful.

The tense should be present 'listen' to match the habitual action. Also, 'feel come' is incorrect; it should be 'feel calm'.