Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What do you usually do on your birthday?
수험생
Are usually have a meal with my family. After a great meals on preparing by my mother we will have a party time. Like having a cake and singing birthday songs together and celebrate it.
시험관
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
수험생
Actually, I usually. Go to the school and have class when I was a kid on my birthday because it is very unlucky that my birthday is always on the weekday, but after that we will have a party to celebrate with my friends.
시험관
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
수험생
Of course, I mean the birthday is very important for me to celebrate it because it is the time I can have a great time with my family or celebrates with my friends was more I can have a birthday cake once a year.
시험관
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
수험생
I mean, it must be tough President Mouth, because he was a very important person of our whole country and everybody admired him very much.
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Part 1
What do you usually do on your birthday?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。同时，回答应更简洁，避免冗余。
예시: I usually have a meal with my family on my birthday. After enjoying the delicious food prepared by my mother, we have a small party where we eat cake, sing birthday songs, and celebrate together.
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。
예시: When I was young, I usually went to school and attended classes on my birthday because it often fell on a weekday. However, after school, I would have a party to celebrate with my friends.
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。
예시: Of course, I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it allows me to spend quality time with my family and friends. Also, I get to enjoy a birthday cake once a year.
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答中出现了错误的人名和表达不清晰，建议准确理解问题并给出具体且相关的答案。
예시: I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is that of the founding father, Mao Zedong, because he played a crucial role in the country's history and is widely respected.
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