Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more detailed and natural by adding specific activities and using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid very short answers and add more relevant vocabulary.

예시: On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my family at home. We often have a small party where we eat cake and share gifts, which makes the day very special for me.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Provide more specific details about the celebration.

예시: When I was young, I often stayed at home on my birthday and celebrated with my family. We usually had a small party with close relatives and friends, which was always fun.

제안: Work on grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be more specific about your feelings and reasons.

예시: For me, celebrating my birthday is not very important because I prefer to stay at home and celebrate quietly with a small group of close family and friends.

제안: Try to give a clearer and more confident answer. Use complete sentences and avoid hesitation. If you are unsure, you can say so politely and then give your opinion.

예시: I don't know much about birthdays in China, but I think the president's birthday might be considered important. However, many people probably celebrate traditional festivals more than individual birthdays.

× On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my family and stay in my home.

✓ On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my family and stay at my home.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to staying at a place like 'home'. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location. So, 'stay at my home' is the proper usage.

× When I was young, on my birthday, I often stayed at my house and others celebrate with my family.

✓ When I was young, on my birthday, I often stayed at my house and others celebrated with my family.

The verb 'celebrate' should be in the past tense 'celebrated' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'. This maintains tense consistency in the sentence.

× With a small party.

✓ We had a small party.

'With a small party' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. To correct, add a subject and verb to form a complete sentence, e.g., 'We had a small party.'

× For me, I think. Celebrated in my birthday is not that important because I just want to stay in my house and celebrate with us small group that I am closed with.

✓ For me, I think celebrating my birthday is not that important because I just want to stay in my house and celebrate with a small group that I am close with.

The original sentence has fragmented parts and incorrect word forms. 'Celebrated in my birthday' should be 'celebrating my birthday' to use the gerund form as the subject. Also, 'us small group' is incorrect; it should be 'a small group'. 'Closed' should be 'close' to describe relationships.

× For me, I think. The president of China birthday is. The most important for China?

✓ For me, I think the president of China's birthday is the most important for China.

The phrase 'The president of China birthday' lacks the possessive form; it should be 'the president of China's birthday'. Also, the sentence fragments should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity.