Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if needed.

예시: I usually skip breakfast, but when I do eat, I prefer a light, healthy meal. For example, I often have cucumber with wholegrain toast and a boiled egg because it is refreshing and gives me some energy for the morning.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Reduce hesitations and use correct grammar (e.g., 'it gives' not 'it's gives').

예시: Yes, I think breakfast is important because it provides energy for the day. For instance, when I eat breakfast I feel more focused at work, whereas skipping it makes me tired and less productive.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence stating the difference, then add specific details and a time reference. Improve sentence structure and avoid repetitions.

예시: Yes, my mornings are quite different now. As a child I always had breakfast at 7:00 AM before school, but now I often skip breakfast because I have to rush to work and do house chores.

제안: Give a clear statement about whether you want to change, then explain specific actions you will take and why. Use correct verb forms and avoid fillers.

예시: Yes, I would like to change my morning routine by planning time for breakfast. For example, I will wake up 20 minutes earlier and prepare a quick breakfast like yogurt with fruit so I have more energy for work and housework.

× Basically, I do not like to eat breakfast in the morning, but sometimes when I uh, take breakfast, I like to uh, take some, uh, healthy breakfast.

✓ Basically, I do not like eating breakfast in the morning, but sometimes when I do have breakfast, I like to have a healthy breakfast.

Use of verb + -ing: After 'like' to express a general preference use the gerund 'like eating' rather than 'like to eat' (both are possible but 'like eating' is more natural here). Also 'take breakfast' is non-idiomatic in modern English; use 'have breakfast'. Replace the repeated 'take' with 'do have' for clarity and remove redundant words. Suggestion: Use 'like eating' for habitual preferences and 'have breakfast' instead of 'take breakfast'.

× Uh, usually I like to eat uh, cucumber.

✓ Usually I like to eat cucumber or cucumbers.

Singular/plural: When speaking about a food in general, use the plural 'cucumbers' or the uncountable form 'cucumber' with context. 'I like to eat cucumber' sounds awkward; prefer 'I like to eat cucumbers' or 'I like cucumber.' Suggestion: Say 'I like to eat cucumbers' for general habit.

× Well, in my opinion, I would say breakfast is important for every person in our daily life because it's, umm, gives more, much more energy, uh, for working, uh, whole day long, uh, if you do not, uh, have breakfast.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I would say breakfast is important for everyone in daily life because it gives much more energy for working the whole day if you do not skip breakfast is incorrect; correct: because it gives much more energy for working the whole day, so you should not skip breakfast.

Pronoun and sentence structure: 'It's gives' is ungrammatical; combine 'it' subject with correct verb 'gives'. 'Every person in our daily life' is awkward; use 'everyone in daily life' or 'everyone in their daily life.' Also the sentence lacked a clear connector; better to say 'because it gives much more energy for working the whole day' and advise 'do not skip breakfast.' Suggestion: Use 'it gives' and 'everyone' or 'everyone in their daily life' and restructure to avoid confusion.

× Yeah, it's completely different, uh, the mornings of my childhood and now because in my childhood I always, uh, take breakfast at 7:00 AM because, umm, my school, I am the school going students then and now I'm busy on my work all time, so I cannot take my breakfast timely.

✓ Yes, the mornings of my childhood and now are completely different because in my childhood I always had breakfast at 7:00 AM since I was a school student then, and now I'm busy with my work all the time, so I cannot have my breakfast on time.

Past tense and subject-verb agreement: 'take breakfast' should be 'had breakfast' when referring to past habits; use past simple 'had.' 'I am the school going students' is incorrect pronoun/number and tense; correct to 'I was a school student.' 'On time' is the idiomatic phrase rather than 'timely.' Also use 'busy with my work' and 'all the time.' Suggestion: Use past tense 'had' for past routines and correct noun phrases like 'school student'.

× In my view, I always change my morning routine because I cannot take breakfast timely, uh, for my housework.

✓ In my view, I want to change my morning routine because I cannot have breakfast on time due to housework.

Present tense and word choice: 'I always change my morning routine' suggests a repeated action; likely intended 'I want to change.' 'Cannot take breakfast timely' is incorrect; use 'cannot have breakfast on time' and 'due to housework' is more natural than 'for my housework.' Suggestion: Use 'want to change' to express intention and 'have breakfast on time' for idiomatic English.

× So I want to take healthy breakfast in uh, everyday morning.

✓ So I want to have a healthy breakfast every morning.

Verb + -ing and article: 'take healthy breakfast' is non-idiomatic; use 'have a healthy breakfast.' 'Everyday morning' is incorrect; use 'every morning.' Suggestion: Say 'have a healthy breakfast every morning.'

× And uh, I think it's give me more energy for my whole day long.

✓ And I think it gives me more energy for my whole day.

Third person singular: 'it' requires the verb form 'gives' not 'give.' Also 'for my whole day long' is redundant; use 'for my whole day' or 'throughout my whole day.' Suggestion: Use 'it gives' and prefer 'throughout my whole day' for clarity.