Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词如"because"和"so"来更好地组织句子，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I started using the internet in primary school because we had computer classes, so I learned how to surf the internet during that time.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和用词不够准确，如"accustomed to surf"应为"accustomed to surfing"。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用，并简化表达以提高自然度。

예시: I go online almost every day because smartphones and chatting apps are very popular, so I often share information with my friends and family.

제안: 回答中句子结构复杂且不够连贯，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达原因和结果，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Before the National College entrance examination, I wasn't allowed to use the internet because it could distract me from studying, and my good scores proved this was effective.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但用词和句式重复，如"too much and too excessively"。建议使用更简洁的表达，并注意词汇搭配的准确性。

예시: It depends; if I have urgent tasks, I avoid spending too much time online, but during my free time, I often browse the internet to find information I need.

제안: 回答内容具体，但语法错误影响表达，如"I will venturing out"应为"I will venture out"。建议注意动词形式，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Without the internet, I would do outdoor activities; for example, I often play table tennis with my boyfriend and go out for food with my friends once a week, which is good for my health.

× I think it was in my primary school because we had a class about computer, so we will learn how to use computer to surf the Internet and that was when I started using the Internet.

✓ I think it was in my primary school because we had a class about computers, so we would learn how to use a computer to surf the Internet and that was when I started using the Internet.

这里“class about computer”中的“computer”需要用复数形式“computers”，因为是指一类课程内容；“use computer”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示使用一台电脑。

× I think it was in my primary school because we had a class about computer, so we will learn how to use computer to surf the Internet and that was when I started using the Internet.

✓ I think it was in my primary school because we had a class about computers, so we would learn how to use a computer to surf the Internet and that was when I started using the Internet.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该用情态动词“would”表示过去经常发生的动作，而不是“will”。

× I think it happens even every day because with the popularity of smartphones and online chatting apps, we are accustomed to surf the Internet and share what we had known to our friends and families.

✓ I think it happens even every day because with the popularity of smartphones and online chatting apps, we are accustomed to surfing the Internet and sharing what we have known with our friends and family.

“accustomed to”后应接动名词形式，故“surf”改为“surfing”；“share”后应接动名词“sharing”；“share ... to”用法错误，正确应为“share ... with”；“families”应为不可数名词“family”。

× I think it's the time before I attended the National College entrance examination because it helped me avoid being addicted to Internet so as to be detrimental to my studying and my score is a testament to.

✓ I think it was the time before I attended the National College Entrance Examination because it helped me avoid being addicted to the Internet so as not to be detrimental to my studying, and my score is a testament to that.

“it's”应改为过去时“it was”，因为描述过去的时间；“addicted to Internet”前应加定冠词“the”；“so as to be detrimental”表达不准确，应为“so as not to be detrimental”；句末“my score is a testament to”后应补充内容，改为“my score is a testament to that”。

× I think it depends because if I have some urgent things to hand, I will avoid myself being addicted to surfing the Internet too much and too excessively.

✓ I think it depends because if I have some urgent things to handle, I will avoid being addicted to surfing the Internet too much and excessively.

“avoid myself being addicted”中“myself”使用错误，动词“avoid”后直接接动名词，不需要反身代词；“things to hand”应为“things to handle”；“too much and too excessively”重复，保留“too much”或“excessively”即可。

× But if I have nothing to do and it's my spare time, I will spend a lot of time online to search what I want to look.

✓ But if I have nothing to do and it's my spare time, I will spend a lot of time online searching for what I want to find.

“search”后应加介词“for”，构成短语“search for something”；“what I want to look”表达不完整，应改为“what I want to find”。

× I will turn to some outdoor activities, for instance, I will always play table tennis with my boyfriend and also I will venturing out for food with my friends once a week.

✓ I will turn to some outdoor activities; for instance, I will always play table tennis with my boyfriend and also I will venture out for food with my friends once a week.

“I will venturing”中“venturing”应为动词原形“venture”，因为情态动词“will”后接动词原形。