Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然，但有重复词汇（"just it was just"），且句子稍显冗长。建议避免重复，简洁表达，同时增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I started using the Internet quite early, around 10 years old when I got my first phone. Initially, I used it mainly to watch cartoons online, and I didn't expect it to become such an important part of my life later.

제안: 回答简洁自然，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: Honestly, I go online almost all day, from the moment I wake up until I go to bed, because I use the Internet for both work and entertainment.

제안: 语法和表达不够准确，有重复和不连贯的问题。建议注意语法结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, during middle and high school in China, students were not allowed to use the Internet or their phones. Therefore, I rarely used my phone during school hours, although sometimes I would play with it after class.

제안: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词和稍微丰富细节来提升表达的连贯性。

예시: Yes, I definitely spend too much time online, nearly 10 hours a day. Sometimes, I find myself just mindlessly scrolling through social media, and I'm trying to be more conscious about reducing this habit.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，表达自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Well, it's hard to imagine life without the Internet, but I guess I would read and write more, and spend more time outdoors. Although I might feel bored at first, I believe I would gradually feel more peaceful over time.

× in Chinese middle school and high schools, students are not allowed to use in the Internet and use their phone.

✓ in Chinese middle schools and high schools, students are not allowed to use the Internet or use their phones.

这里“middle school”和“high schools”应保持复数形式一致，且“use in the Internet”中“in”多余，应去掉；“phone”应使用复数形式“phones”，因为指的是学生们各自的手机。

× students are not allowed to use in the Internet and use their phone.

✓ students are not allowed to use the Internet or use their phones.

“not allowed to”后面应直接接动词原形，且连接两个动作时应使用“or”表示选择，而不是“and”。

× sometimes I will play it.

✓ sometimes I play it.

这里描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，而不是将来时“will”。

× I nearly spend my whole day online.

✓ I nearly spend my whole day online.

此句中“nearly spend”表达不准确，应改为“I spend nearly my whole day online.”以符合英语习惯。

× I nearly never spent my time on my phone.

✓ I nearly never spend my time on my phone.

描述过去习惯时应使用一般过去时“spent”，但此处语境应为现在时态，故改为“spend”。