Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和冗余。建议直接回答问题，说明开始使用互联网的大致时间，并简要说明原因，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: I started using the internet when I was about 14 years old because I wanted to watch Korean TV shows that I couldn't find on regular TV.

제안: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免口语化表达如“you know”。建议使用连接词使回答更连贯，并具体说明上网频率和原因。

예시: I go online very often, almost all the time. For example, during short breaks, I usually check my phone to browse news or social media.

제안: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I remember when I was 14, my mother didn't allow me to use the internet because I needed to focus on my studies and exams.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和口语化表达，建议使用更正式和准确的语言，避免重复，结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time online because in today's information age, the internet is essential for studying and work, so it's hard to avoid it.

제안: 回答应更简洁且逻辑清晰，避免重复和语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Without the internet, I would spend more time reading books. For example, when I faced problems at work, I found useful advice in books that helped me improve my skills.

× To be honest I couldn't tell the exact day but I guess maybe in my 14th because at that day I was so upset of with the TV programs, especially for the Korean programs which is really romantic for me.

✓ To be honest, I couldn't tell the exact day but I guess maybe when I was 14 because on that day I was so upset with the TV programs, especially the Korean programs which were really romantic for me.

这里涉及过去时态的使用错误。'in my 14th' 应改为 'when I was 14'，表示年龄。'at that day' 应改为 'on that day'，表示具体某一天。'which is' 应改为 'which were'，因为指的是复数的节目。建议注意时间表达和主谓一致。

× So I use it to watch some TV shows on Internet.

✓ So I used it to watch some TV shows on the Internet.

这里时态应与上下文保持一致，使用过去时 'used'。另外，'on Internet' 应加定冠词，改为 'on the Internet'。建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用。

× I think the answer is all the time and nowadays people are more and more relied on the mobile phone and Internet.

✓ I think the answer is all the time and nowadays people rely more and more on mobile phones and the Internet.

'are more and more relied on' 是被动语态错误，应改为主动语态 'rely more and more on'。'mobile phone' 应用复数 'mobile phones'，'Internet' 前加定冠词。建议注意主动被动语态和名词复数形式。

× So when I get some spare time I will scroll my phone and search for some new information.

✓ So when I get some spare time, I scroll my phone and search for some new information.

这里描述习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而非将来时 'will scroll'。建议根据语境选择正确时态。

× Like when I have a 5 minutes break I will certainly take out my phone and you know, just scroll it and watch some new.

✓ Like when I have a 5-minute break, I will certainly take out my phone and, you know, just scroll it and watch something new.

'5 minutes break' 应改为 '5-minute break'，形容词短语修饰名词时用单数形式。'watch some new' 不完整，应改为 'watch something new'。建议注意复合形容词和不完整表达。

× But at that time I just had spent more time on my study or my examination, so my mom closed the door of the room, which kept the computer.

✓ But at that time I had to spend more time on my studies or my examinations, so my mom closed the door of the room which kept the computer.

'had spent' 用法错误，应为 'had to spend' 表示必须做某事。'study' 和 'examination' 应用复数形式。'which kept the computer' 结构不自然，建议保持原句结构但注意语义。建议注意动词短语和名词复数。

× But at that time I just had spent more time on my study or my examination, so my mom closed the door of the room, which kept the computer.

✓ But at that time I had to spend more time studying or preparing for my examinations, so my mom closed the door of the room where the computer was kept.

'had spent more time on my study' 应改为 'had to spend more time studying'，更自然。'room, which kept the computer' 应改为 'room where the computer was kept'，更符合英语表达习惯。建议注意介词和定语从句的使用。

× Yeah, it's definitely, but I don't have any choices.

✓ Yeah, definitely, but I don't have any choice.

'any choices' 应为不可数名词 'any choice'，表示没有选择。建议注意可数与不可数名词的区分。

× Especially in such a information age, people can't escape from the Internet.

✓ Especially in such an information age, people can't escape from the Internet.

'a information' 前的冠词应为 'an'，因为 'information' 以元音音素开头。建议注意冠词与发音的搭配。

× For example, we need to use the Internet to do all kinds of studies work and something like this.

✓ For example, we need to use the Internet to do all kinds of study work and things like this.

'studies work' 不正确，应为 'study work'。'something like this' 应改为复数 'things like this'，更符合语境。建议注意名词形式和代词的使用。

× So it is hard for me to, you know, just run away from the Internet and say no to it.

✓ So it is hard for me to, you know, just stay away from the Internet and say no to it.

'run away from the Internet' 不太合适，通常用 'stay away from' 表示远离。建议注意习惯用语的选择。

× I will do some reading actually and I found reading is really good for our human beings.

✓ I would do some reading actually and I find reading is really good for human beings.

回答假设情况时用 'would' 更合适。'found' 应用现在时 'find'，因为是普遍真理。'our human beings' 改为 'human beings' 更自然。建议注意时态和所有格的使用。

× For the one hand, reading can help me to learn some new skills.

✓ On the one hand, reading can help me learn some new skills.

固定短语应为 'On the one hand'。'help me to learn' 中 'to' 可省略。建议注意固定搭配和动词不定式的用法。

× And I remember there was a time when I was dealing with some some problem with my job and I looked for a book which could give me some handy experience.

✓ And I remember there was a time when I was dealing with some problems at my job and I looked for a book which could give me some handy experience.

'some some problem' 重复，应删去一个。'problem' 应用复数 'problems'。'with my job' 改为 'at my job' 更合适。建议注意重复词和介词的使用。