Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use complete sentences with correct articles and prepositions. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about how the internet helped in your studies.

예시: I started using the internet when I was in my 12th standard because my teacher introduced it to us. It was very helpful for my studies, especially for researching topics and finding educational resources online.

제안: Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to be more concise and specific about your online activities.

예시: I usually go online during my free time because I enjoy researching new technologies and learning about the cultures of different countries.

제안: Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Make sure your answer is complete and clear. Use linking words to explain the reason and time clearly.

예시: Yes, I remember when I was in the 5th standard, my parents did not allow me to use the internet because they thought it was not good for me at that age.

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more specific about how you spend your time online.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time online now that I have completed my education. I usually watch short videos and search for information about new technologies.

제안: Make sure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your activities without the internet.

예시: If I did not have the internet, I would prefer to spend time with my friends. We often go to the temple together to seek blessings, and I enjoy participating in different activities there.

× I started using Internet in my 12th standard.

✓ I started using the Internet in my 12th standard.

The word 'Internet' is a unique noun and requires the definite article 'the' before it to specify it properly.

× I know about Internet from my teacher because it is helpful in our study.

✓ I know about the Internet from my teacher because it is helpful in our study.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Internet' as it is a specific noun referring to a unique entity.

× I go online on Internet when I have free time and I prefer to spend my free time on Internet for research about new technology and culture of different countries.

✓ I go online on the Internet when I have free time and I prefer to spend my free time on the Internet for research about new technology and the culture of different countries.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Internet' and 'culture' to specify these nouns correctly.

× Yes, I remember the time when my parents do not allow to me use Internet because it is not good for me and I was in the 5th standard when I want to use Internet but according.

✓ Yes, I remember the time when my parents did not allow me to use the Internet because it was not good for me and I was in the 5th standard when I wanted to use the Internet but they did not allow me.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'do not allow to me' is incorrect; it should be 'did not allow me to'. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'did not allow' and 'wanted'. The article 'the' is needed before 'Internet'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× Yes, I spend my whole day on Internet because I completed my education and now I am free and I spend my time on Internet in watching reels and searching about new technology.

✓ Yes, I spend my whole day on the Internet because I have completed my education and now I am free and I spend my time on the Internet watching reels and searching about new technology.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'Internet'. Also, 'completed' should be in present perfect 'have completed' to indicate a past action with present relevance. 'In watching' is corrected to 'watching' to fit the verb pattern.

× When I do not use Internet, I prefer to spend my time with my friends and me and my friend go at temple for getting blessings from Lord and in temple I like to do different kind of.

✓ When I do not use the Internet, I prefer to spend my time with my friends, and my friend and I go to the temple to get blessings from the Lord. In the temple, I like to do different kinds of activities.

The article 'the' is needed before 'Internet', 'temple', and 'Lord'. The pronoun 'me and my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'my friend and I' as the subject. The preposition 'go at temple' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the temple'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.