Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

예시: I started using the internet when I was 16 years old, during my high school years.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态，并且句子结构更完整。

예시: I didn't go online very often because my main focus was studying at that time.

제안: 回答较为完整，但时态和语法有小错误。建议注意时态一致性，并丰富细节。

예시: Before I started high school, my parents didn't allow me to use the internet because they thought it was dangerous for young teenagers.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

예시: Sometimes I think I spend too much time online because when I'm in a bad mood, I usually use the internet to entertain myself, which takes up a lot of my time.

제안: 表达有些笨拙，词汇使用不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并且注意名词的单复数形式。

예시: Without the internet, I would have many options, such as reading books, doing handicrafts, or drawing.

× Will I start to use Internet in my 16 in my high school age?

✓ Did I start to use the Internet when I was 16 in high school?

这里的句子是在询问过去的时间，应该使用一般过去时，而不是将来时。'Will'表示将来时，不符合语境。建议使用一般过去时的疑问句形式。

× Will I start to use Internet in my 16 in my high school age?

✓ Did I start to use the Internet when I was 16 in high school?

'Internet'前面需要加定冠词'the'，因为Internet是特指的名词。

× Well, I didn't go online very much because my mainly work is to study at that time.

✓ Well, I didn't go online very much because my main work was to study at that time.

句子描述过去的情况，谓语动词应使用过去时。'is'应改为'was'。另外，'mainly work'应改为形容词'main'修饰名词'work'。

× Well, before I entered my high school, I was not allowed to use Internet because my parents think it's dangerous for the young teenagers.

✓ Well, before I entered high school, I was not allowed to use the Internet because my parents thought it was dangerous for young teenagers.

'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。'high school'前不需要加冠词。动词时态应保持一致，描述过去的事情，'think'和'it's'应改为过去时'thought'和'was'。

× Well, before I entered my high school, I was not allowed to use Internet because my parents think it's dangerous for the young teenagers.

✓ Well, before I entered high school, I was not allowed to use the Internet because my parents thought it was dangerous for young teenagers.

描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去时，'think'和'it's'应改为'thought'和'was'。

× Well, for some time I think so, because when I in bad mood I usually tend to use Internet to amuse myself and it spanned me too much time.

✓ Well, sometimes I think so, because when I am in a bad mood I usually tend to use the Internet to amuse myself and it takes me too much time.

描述现在的习惯，应使用一般现在时。'in bad mood'缺少动词，应为'am in a bad mood'。'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。'spanned'是过去式，不符合语境，应改为一般现在时'takes'。

× Well, for some time I think so, because when I in bad mood I usually tend to use Internet to amuse myself and it spanned me too much time.

✓ Well, sometimes I think so, because when I am in a bad mood I usually tend to use the Internet to amuse myself and it takes me too much time.

'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Well, for some time I think so, because when I in bad mood I usually tend to use Internet to amuse myself and it spanned me too much time.

✓ Well, sometimes I think so, because when I am in a bad mood I usually tend to use the Internet to amuse myself and it takes me too much time.

'in bad mood'缺少动词，正确表达应为'am in a bad mood'。

× Well, I think there's so much choice I have without Internet.

✓ Well, I think there are so many choices I have without the Internet.

'choice'应使用复数形式'choices'，因为表示多种选择。'there's'是there is的缩写，单数形式，复数应使用'there are'。

× Well, I think there's so much choice I have without Internet.

✓ Well, I think there are so many choices I have without the Internet.

'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。

× For example, reading some books, making some handmade or drawing are also good.

✓ For example, reading some books, making some handmade items, or drawing are also good.

'making some handmade'表达不完整，应补充名词，如'handmade items'。