Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词的使用不当。建议注意动词时态的一致性，并使用正确的冠词和介词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I started using the Internet when I was in primary school. My father took me to his office and showed me how to play online games. That was my first experience using the Internet.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如单复数不一致和动词形式错误。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I go online every day because in China, almost everyone uses WeChat to stay in touch with family and friends. It is an essential tool for chatting, making payments, and even work. Therefore, I find myself going online quite frequently.

제안: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，正确使用被动语态和动词形式，使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I remember when I was in high school, my parents did not allow me to use the Internet because they thought it was distracting me from studying. They limited my Internet access during the week to help me focus on my studies.

제안: 回答内容较好，但可以使用更多连接词和更丰富的词汇来增强表达的连贯性和多样性。

예시: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I often find myself scrolling through short videos on TikTok for hours. Moreover, I have many online tasks to complete, which leaves me little time for other activities except sleeping.

제안: 表达不够清晰，句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达意图，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Without the Internet, I would read books that interest me or take walks and chat with my friends in person. I prefer doing things I enjoy offline, but if I have to do something boring, I might use the Internet instead.

× I using Internet when I was in primary school.

✓ I was using the Internet when I was in primary school.

句子中缺少助动词，动词使用时应为过去进行时，需加上was。

× I using Internet when I was in primary school.

✓ I was using the Internet when I was in primary school.

Internet前应加定冠词the，因为Internet是特指的名词。

× opened the computer to let me play this online games.

✓ opened the computer to let me play these online games.

games是复数，指示代词应使用these而非this。

× This is my first time to using the Internet.

✓ This is my first time using the Internet.

first time后面接动词时用动名词形式，去掉to。

× I go online every day because in China almost everyone uses WeChat to stay in touch with family or friends.

✓ I go online every day because in China almost everyone uses WeChat to stay in touch with family or friends.

此句无明显冠词错误，保持原句。

× It is an essential tools in our daily life for chatting, payments, even work.

✓ It is an essential tool in our daily life for chatting, payments, even work.

tools为复数，前面用单数an essential tool，需保持单复数一致。

× So I find myself go online quite frequently.

✓ So I find myself going online quite frequently.

find后接动词时，动词应使用动名词形式。

× my parents wasn't allowed me to use the Internet because it is a addicted to me addicting me from studying.

✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because it was addictive and distracted me from studying.

wasn't allowed用法错误，主语为复数parents，否定形式应为didn't allow；addicted用法错误，应为形容词addictive；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× because it is a addicted to me addicting me from studying.

✓ because it was addictive and distracted me from studying.

addicted用法错误，应为形容词addictive；addicting用法不当，改为distracted更合适。

× My parents wanted me to focus more on my studies so they limited my Internet access during the week.

✓ My parents wanted me to focus more on my studies, so they limited my Internet access during the week.

此句时态正确，保持原句。

× I think I spend too much time on line because I find myself always scrolling through the short videos on TikTok for hours.

✓ I think I spend too much time online because I find myself always scrolling through short videos on TikTok for hours.

on line应写为online；the short videos改为short videos更自然。

× Besides that, I have too many Internet tasks to do which leaves me little time for other activities except sleeping.

✓ Besides that, I have too many Internet tasks to do, which leaves me little time for other activities except sleeping.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I would read a book that I'm interested or take a walk with my friends, chat with them without Internet because I would choose the things that I'm interested without Internet.

✓ I would read a book that I'm interested in or take a walk with my friends, chat with them without the Internet because I would choose things that I'm interested in without the Internet.

interested后应加介词in；Internet前应加定冠词the；去掉多余的the。

× chat with them without Internet because I would choose the things that I'm interested without Internet.

✓ chat with them without the Internet because I would choose things that I'm interested in without the Internet.

Internet前应加定冠词the；interested后应加介词in。

× If I have to do something boring, I would prefer to choose use the Internet.

✓ If I have to do something boring, I would prefer to use the Internet.

prefer后接动词时，动词用不定式to use，去掉choose。