Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Përmirësoni strukturën e përgjigjes duke përdorur kohën e duhur dhe duke dhënë një përgjigje më të qartë dhe të lidhur. Përdorni fjalë lidhëse për të bërë përgjigjen më të rrjedhshme dhe shmangni përsëritjet.

예시: I started using the internet when I was about 10 years old. Since then, I have enjoyed browsing history websites and watching movies online. I also like using Instagram to keep in touch with my friends.

제안: Përmirësoni qartësinë dhe koherencën e përgjigjes duke përdorur fjalë lidhëse dhe duke dhënë një përgjigje të drejtpërdrejtë për frekuencën e përdorimit të internetit.

예시: I usually go online in the evenings after work. However, on busy days, I might not have much time to use the internet.

제안: Përmirësoni strukturën dhe qartësinë e përgjigjes duke përdorur kohën e duhur dhe duke shpjeguar më mirë situatën me detaje të qarta.

예시: Yes, I remember the first time I wasn't allowed to use the internet was when I was working, and I didn't take my phone with me during the day. However, I still liked to use the internet at night.

제안: Përmirësoni rrjedhshmërinë dhe përdorni fjalë lidhëse për të shprehur mendimin tuaj qartë dhe në mënyrë të organizuar.

예시: Not really. I don't spend too much time online because I am busy with work and spending time with my family when I get home.

제안: Përmirësoni strukturën e përgjigjes duke dhënë një përgjigje më të qartë dhe të lidhur, duke përdorur fjalë lidhëse dhe duke shmangur përsëritjet.

예시: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend more time outdoors with my friends and family. I would also watch TV and enjoy other activities like going out for dinner.

× I start years ago.

✓ I started years ago.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Start' is present tense; the correct past tense form is 'started'.

× I have 18 years and I like to say Internet, watch some history and watch movies.

✓ I am 18 years old and I like to use the Internet, watch history, and watch movies.

The phrase 'I have 18 years' is incorrect in English; the correct expression for age is 'I am 18 years old.' Also, 'say Internet' is incorrect; 'use the Internet' is appropriate. 'Some history' should be 'history' as an uncountable noun here.

× I like Instagram. Yes, I like the Internet.

✓ I like Instagram. Yes, I like the Internet.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Sometimes in the dinner before in the day I work.

✓ Sometimes I go online during dinner before I work during the day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and preposition use. 'In the dinner' should be 'during dinner,' and the sentence structure should be rearranged for clarity.

× In the day I work full time it depends.

✓ I work full time during the day; it depends.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and word order. Adding punctuation and rearranging improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For in dinner I go for a bite.

✓ For dinner, I go for a bite.

The phrase 'For in dinner' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'For dinner.'

× Yes, one first time because I work and I don't take my phone all day.

✓ Yes, the first time was because I was working and I didn't take my phone all day.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense verbs 'was working' and 'didn't take' should be used instead of present tense.

× Yes, but night I like to see the Internet.

✓ Yes, but at night I like to use the Internet.

The phrase 'night I like to see the Internet' is incorrect. 'At night' is the correct prepositional phrase, and 'use the Internet' is the appropriate verb phrase.

× I don't like to spend very, very spend very much time on the Internet because, uh, don't, uh, I don't have very time because I go to work, I go to home with my family spend sometimes.

✓ I don't like to spend too much time on the Internet because I don't have much time; I go to work and spend time with my family at home sometimes.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect quantifiers like 'very, very spend very much' and incorrect phrases like 'I don't have very time.' Correct quantifiers are 'too much' and 'much time.' Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I go to home with my family spend sometimes.

✓ I go home and spend time with my family sometimes.

The phrase 'go to home' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go home.' Also, 'spend sometimes' is incomplete; it should be 'spend time with my family sometimes.'

× I don't, I don't know.

✓ I don't know.

The repetition of 'I don't' is unnecessary and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'I don't know.'

× I like, I go with my friends outside.

✓ I like to go outside with my friends.

The phrase 'I like, I go with my friends outside' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'I like to go outside with my friends.'

× I spent time with my family.

✓ I spend time with my family.

The question is about what the student would do without the internet, implying a habitual or future action, so present tense 'spend' is more appropriate than past tense 'spent.'

× I'm going the dinner, I watch TV.

✓ I have dinner and watch TV.

The phrase 'I'm going the dinner' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have dinner.' Also, the sentence should be connected properly.

× Internet is very important.

✓ The Internet is very important.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the global network.