Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“to watching”应为“to watch”，且表达不够自然和流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的动词形式。

예시: I started using the Internet when I was about 10 years old in primary school. At that time, I mainly used it to watch videos.

제안: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: I usually go online every day because I rely on the Internet for many activities. For instance, I often chat with my friends and do online shopping, which makes my life much more convenient.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“effects”应为“affects”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充细节。

예시: Yes, I remember that during my childhood, I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because my parents believed it would affect my studies.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“rely on online”应为“rely on the Internet”，且“audit for delivery by airline”表达不明确。建议使用更准确和自然的表达，并避免不必要的复杂词汇。

예시: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I rely on the Internet for many daily activities, such as tracking my airline deliveries and chatting with my friends and family.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“have if I didn't have”，表达不清晰且不自然。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达观点。

예시: If I didn't have the Internet, my life would be very difficult because I rely on it for work, communication, and entertainment. Without it, I would feel lost and disconnected from the world.

× At that time I mainly used it to watching some video, some videos and.

✓ At that time I mainly used it to watch some videos.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形watch，而不是动名词watching。此外，video应使用复数形式videos，因为表示多个视频。

× Yes, I remember that during my childhood when I wasn't allowed to use Internet simply because my parents believe that Internet effects my study.

✓ Yes, I remember that during my childhood when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet simply because my parents believe that the Internet affects my study.

Internet前应加定冠词the，因为Internet是特指的名词。动词effects应为affects，表示影响。

× Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I always rely on online for many daily activities.

✓ Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I always rely on the internet for many daily activities.

动词rely on后应接名词或代词，不能直接接副词online，应改为the internet。

× I need to audit for delivery by airline and chat with my friends and family.

✓ I need to check the delivery by airline and chat with my friends and family.

动词audit通常用于审计，不适合此处语境，应改为check。介词for不合适，直接用动词check即可。

× If I have if I didn't have the Internet, I think my life would be very difficult and exhausting.

✓ If I didn't have the Internet, I think my life would be very difficult and exhausting.

句子中出现重复的条件状语从句“if I have if I didn't have”，应删除多余部分，保持句子结构完整。

× If without Internet I would feel very lost and discounted from the word, the Internet has become an insulting.

✓ Without the Internet, I would feel very lost and disconnected from the world; the Internet has become an essential part of life.

Internet前应加定冠词the。单词discounted用错，应为disconnected，表示断开联系。word应为world，意思是世界。insulting用错，应为essential，表示必要的。句子结构也需调整使其通顺。