Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“wrong 12 years old”应为“around 12 years old”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，避免口语中的犹豫词汇。

예시: I started using the Internet when I was around 12 years old. At that time, I mainly used it for school research and chatting with friends. Since then, it has become an essential part of my daily life for both learning and entertainment.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Social media ran new updates”应为“to check social media for new updates”，且最后一句不通顺。建议加强句子连贯性和词汇准确性。

예시: I go online several times a day, mainly to check emails and social media for new updates. I usually browse the Internet in the morning and evening to stay connected and informed. It's convenient to access information quickly this way.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“record time”应为“remember a time”，“parents was”应为“parents were”，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和词汇选择，提升表达流畅度。

예시: Yes, I remember a time during my travel when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet. My parents were quite strict about screen time because they believed excessive Internet use could distract me from my studies. For example, they only permitted me to go online for educational purposes and limited recreational browsing.

제안: 回答中存在时态错误和句子不完整的问题，如“Ever.”和“So.”不完整。建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，避免断句。

예시: Definitely. I think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially for entertainment and social media. For example, I often find myself scrolling through videos or chatting with friends, which can easily take up several hours a day. However, I try to balance this by setting limits.

제안: 回答中有表达不清和语法错误，如“profile information”不合适，且最后一句不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

예시: Without the Internet, I would probably rely more on traditional methods of communication and information gathering, such as reading books, newspapers, or talking face to face with people. It would be more time-consuming to get information and stay connected with friends and family.

× I start using the Internet when I was a wrong 12 years old.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was 12 years old.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式。'start'应改为'started'。另外，'wrong'是多余的，应删除。

× Since then it is become. Uhm, essential part of my daily life for both learning and entertainment.

✓ Since then it has become an essential part of my daily life for both learning and entertainment.

'Since then'表示从过去某时开始持续到现在，需用现在完成时，'is become'应改为'has become'。

× Social media ran new updates, for example.

✓ Social media ran new updates, for example.

此句语法无明显错误，可能是表达不清，但不属于指定语法错误类型。故不修改。

× The inconvenience of assessing information quickly May's going online or regular.

✓ The convenience of accessing information quickly makes going online regular.

原句中'inconvenience'应为'convenience'，'assessing'应为'accessing'，'May's'应为'makes'，且句子结构混乱，需调整。

× My parents was quiet straight about screen time and believe that excessive Internet use could extract me from my studies.

✓ My parents were quite strict about screen time and believed that excessive Internet use could distract me from my studies.

主语是复数'parents'，谓语动词应用复数形式'were'，'quiet'应为'adverb'形式'quite'，'straight'应为'strict'，'believe'应用过去式'believed'，'extract'应为'distract'。

× For example, the only permitted me to go online for educational purposes and limited recreational browsing.

✓ For example, they only permitted me to go online for educational purposes and limited recreational browsing.

'the'用法错误，应为主语代词'they'。

× I do think I spent quite a lot of time online, especially for entertainment and social media.

✓ I do think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially for entertainment and social media.

此句表达现在的观点，动词应使用现在时'spend'，而非过去时'spent'。

× Ever. I tried to balance this by setting limits. So.

✓ I try to balance this by setting limits.

'Ever.'无意义且断句错误，应删除。'tried'改为现在时'try'以符合上下文。

× Without the Internet, I would probably rely more on traditional methods of communication and information gathering such as reading books, newspapers, or talking face to face with people.

✓ Without the Internet, I would probably rely more on traditional methods of communication and information gathering such as reading books, newspapers, or talking face to face with people.

此句为虚拟语气，表达假设情况，语法正确，无需修改。

× It would be more time consuming profile information.

✓ It would be more time-consuming to profile information.

'time consuming'应连写为复合形容词'time-consuming'，且句子缺少动词，需加不定式'to profile'使句子完整。

× All stay connected with friends and family.

✓ I would find it harder to stay connected with friends and family.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整，需补充完整表达。