Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了时间和感受，但语法和用词不够准确，且有些冗余。建议注意冠词和介词的使用，避免重复表达。

예시: I started using the Internet about 20 years ago when I was in high school. I was very excited because it was my first time exploring so much information online, and I felt amazed by the variety of content available.

제안: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议练习简单句子结构，确保回答直接且连贯。

예시: I go online every day because I need to use the computer for work and to connect with my colleagues and friends. I also rely on the internet to find information and guidance.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不完整，影响理解。建议练习完整句子表达，使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: About a month ago, the Wi-Fi in my office suddenly stopped working, so I couldn't use the internet there. Because of that, I had to go to a nearby company and rely on their weak Wi-Fi to finish my work. It was quite frustrating.

제안: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误，内容不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点并提供具体原因。

예시: I believe I spend too much time online because I often use my computer for work both in the office and at home. Nowadays, it is quite common for people to rely on the internet for daily tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意时态和句子结构，确保表达清晰完整。

예시: If there were no internet nowadays, people's lives would become simpler and more traditional. For example, instead of chatting online, we would spend more time reading books, traveling, and meeting friends face to face. This might make life more interesting and meaningful.

× I started using the Internet about the 20 years ago when I was still in high school.

✓ I started using the Internet about 20 years ago when I was still in high school.

这里的错误是多余的定冠词“the”，在表示大约时间时不需要使用“the”。正确表达是“about 20 years ago”。

× I still remember I feeling amazed by the variety of content available, which made me very happy.

✓ I still remember feeling amazed by the variety of content available, which made me very happy.

动词“remember”后面接动名词“feeling”，不需要加主语“I”，否则语法错误。应直接用“remember feeling”。

× Naughty Zygon lying every day because I have to use. A myself another computer too. Connect with others such as my colleagues and friends, and I also rely on the. On line to guide him.

✓ I go online every day because I have to use a computer myself. I connect with others such as my colleagues and friends, and I also rely on the online resources to guide me.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。需要补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× Less than a month there, Wi-Fi in my office suddenly stopped working, so I wasn't allowed to use the Internet there.

✓ Less than a month ago, the Wi-Fi in my office suddenly stopped working, so I wasn't allowed to use the Internet there.

缺少时间状语“ago”，且“Wi-Fi”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特定的Wi-Fi。

× Because of that, I had to go to nearby, come company and rely on someone else weak weak Wi-Fi to finish my work.

✓ Because of that, I had to go to a nearby company and rely on someone else's weak Wi-Fi to finish my work.

原句中“nearby, come company”表达不清，缺少冠词和所有格，且“weak weak”重复，应改为“a nearby company”和“someone else's weak Wi-Fi”。

× It was quite a fresh tree. Frustrating because the.

✓ It was quite frustrating because of that.

“fresh tree”是错误搭配，应为“frustrating”，且句子不完整，应补全。

× I believe I spend too much time online.

✓ I believe I spend too much time online.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Because I often use my computer to for work in my office or using my surface and home.

✓ Because I often use my computer for work in my office or use my Surface at home.

原句中“to for work”和“using my surface and home”结构混乱，应改为“use my computer for work”及“use my Surface at home”。

× This quite common nowadays society people rely on the. On line to do the daily walk and.

✓ This is quite common nowadays; people rely on the online resources to do their daily work.

缺少动词“is”，且“the online”应为“the online resources”，句子不完整且“walk”应为“work”。

× I think there were no Internet nowadays.

✓ I think there is no Internet nowadays.

表达现在情况应使用现在时“is”，而非过去时“were”。

× I think a people's life so would become more simpler and more traditional.

✓ I think people's lives would become simpler and more traditional.

“more simpler”是错误的比较级用法，应直接用“simpler”；“a people's life”表达不当，应为“people's lives”。

× For example, instead of chatting on line, we would spend more time reading book or traveling, meeting friends face to face.

✓ For example, instead of chatting online, we would spend more time reading books, traveling, and meeting friends face to face.

“on line”应写作“online”；“reading book”应为复数“reading books”；并且列举动作时应使用逗号和连词“and”。

× This might make time more interesting and more.

✓ This might make life more interesting and enjoyable.

句子不完整，缺少名词和形容词，应补全为“life more interesting and enjoyable”。