T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use varied vocabulary. Reduce redundancy (“always” and “all the time”) and correct small grammatical slips (e.g. “cheaper than other clothes”). Add one linking phrase and a brief specific example to support your point.

예시: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they're comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often pair a plain tee with jeans for running errands, and I can throw it in the washing machine without worrying about special care.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant details. To improve, add a linking word to show reason and include a brief specific example (where you shop or a recent purchase) to make it more concrete. Watch minor phrasing: say “two or three times a year” without hesitation.

예시: Not really — maybe two or three times a year because I prefer basics that last. For instance, I recently bought a black cotton T-shirt from a local market because it goes with both jeans and a skirt.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct word order errors, and use linking words to structure the idea. Be more specific about examples for older people (how they style T-shirts) and avoid vague phrasing like “other people often very wear.”

예시: T-shirts are quite popular among older people in my country because of the hot climate. For example, many older men wear plain T-shirts with lightweight trousers, while older women sometimes add a light jacket or a scarf to make the outfit look smarter.

제안: Good content and personal detail. To improve coherence, start with a direct past-tense topic sentence, use a linking word to connect past habit to present practice, and correct small grammar issues (“parents' house”). Keep it concise by removing redundancy.

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts a lot as a child. In fact, I still keep a pile of old band T-shirts at my parents' house, and I sometimes alter and wear them now for relaxed days at home because they’re comfortable.

× I always use or wear T-shirts all the time, as in every day, because it's easy to style, it's easy to wash, much cheaper than every other clothes, and comfortable to wear.

✓ I always wear T-shirts every day because they are easy to style, easy to wash, much cheaper than other clothes, and comfortable to wear.

Errors: redundant 'use or wear' and 'all the time, as in every day' (wordiness); 'it's' refers to singular but T-shirts plural so use 'they are'; 'every other clothes' is incorrect plural construction — use 'other clothes'. Suggestion: use consistent plural agreement with 'T-shirts' (they), remove redundancy, and replace 'every other clothes' with 'other clothes'.

× I don't buy T-shirts very often, maybe two or three times a year. I usually stick to neutral colors like black, white, or brown because they are versatile and easy to match with shorts, jeans, or skirts.

✓ I don't buy T-shirts very often, maybe two or three times a year. I usually stick to neutral colors like black, white, and brown because they are versatile and easy to match with shorts, jeans, or skirts.

Minor punctuation/style: using 'or' in a list of three colors is acceptable but 'and' is more natural in this context. No major grammar error; suggestion: use 'and' for a natural list. (This aligns with article/coordination clarity.)

× Other people often very wear simple casual T-shirts for daily activities, and some combine them with smart trouser or light jackets to look more stylish.

✓ Other people often wear very simple casual T-shirts for daily activities, and some combine them with smart trousers or light jackets to look more stylish.

Errors: adverb order — 'very' should modify 'simple' ('very simple'), not placed between verb and object; 'wear' is the verb and must directly precede the object; 'trouser' should be plural 'trousers'. Suggestion: place adverbs before adjectives they modify and ensure correct plural nouns and natural word order (subject + adverb + verb + object).

× Definitely, I still have a pile of T-shirts at my parents house in the province and I sometimes wear them now because they're comfortable and fit me better after I alter them.

✓ Definitely, I still have a pile of T-shirts at my parents' house in the province, and I sometimes wear them now because they're comfortable and fit me better after I altered them.

Errors: possessive missing — 'parents house' should be 'parents' house'; tense consistency — when referring to past alteration, use past tense 'altered' to match 'fit me better after I altered them'; comma needed before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: add apostrophe for possessive, keep tense consistent (past action 'altered'), and punctuate to separate clauses.

× They're mostly casual or old band T-shirts that I don't wear out, but I like keeping them for relaxed days at home.

✓ They're mostly casual or old band T-shirts that I don't wear out often, but I like keeping them for relaxed days at home.

Issue: 'don't wear out' without frequency can sound odd; adding 'often' clarifies meaning (I don't wear them until they are worn out). Alternatively, 'I don't wear them out' is grammatical but may be interpreted as 'I don't wear them until they are ruined'. Suggestion: add 'often' to clarify intent, or rephrase as 'I don't wear them much' if that is the intended meaning.