Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent, precise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give one or two specific details (type, who you rode with, or a memory). Use linking words if adding details. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. I often rode with my older sister, which helped me gain confidence and balance.

제안: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like because, for example, and therefore. Avoid vague endings.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Russia because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see commuters and students cycling in the city, especially in summer, which shows bicycles are a common mode of transport.

× It was, umm, pink bicycle with four.

✓ It was, umm, a pink bicycle with training wheels.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'pink bicycle' (Article errors). The phrase 'with four' is unclear; likely referring to 'training wheels' so replace with 'with training wheels' for clarity. Suggestion: always use 'a' or 'the' before singular countable nouns and state what 'four' refers to.

× I saw many people on streets and they are driving a bicycle, so and I think it's very.

✓ I saw many people on the streets riding bicycles, and I think they are very popular.

Use of prepositions and verb choices are incorrect. 'on streets' should be 'on the streets' (Incorrect use of prepositions / Article errors). 'Driving a bicycle' is unnatural; use 'riding bicycles'. 'So and I think it's very.' is unfinished and unclear; replace with 'and I think they are very popular' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use 'on the streets', use 'ride' for bicycles, and finish opinions with clear adjectives like 'popular'.

× they are driving a bicycle

✓ they ride bicycles

Plural subject 'they' should match plural object form; 'a bicycle' suggests singular object and 'driving' is less appropriate for bicycles. Use plural noun 'bicycles' and verb 'ride' for natural collocation. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural objects and choose appropriate verbs for the activity.

× I don't know.

✓ I don't remember exactly.

Although grammatically acceptable, in context it functions as a filler and is vague. Replace with 'I don't remember exactly' to better convey uncertainty about details. Suggestion: prefer more informative phrases when explaining memory or uncertainty.