Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid filler words, and organize the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently and replace vague time phrases with clearer ones. Also avoid oversharing irrelevant emotional detail; focus on factual information when appropriate.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father often rode it with me around our neighborhood for about two years, but after he had an accident we sold the bike and stopped riding.

제안: Correct vocabulary errors, avoid repetition, and structure the response with a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons supported by examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and be careful with grammar (singular/plural, article use).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in my hometown. This is because the area is densely populated and narrow roads make cars impractical, so people often use bikes for short trips; for example, many middle-class families choose bikes for commuting to local markets.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child which my dad used to ride a lot with me around, but uh, after 2-3 years my dad got into an accident so we had to sell that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child that my dad used to ride around with me, but after two or three years my dad had an accident, so we had to sell the bike.

ID 5: Past tense issue Problems: 'got into an accident' is acceptable but 'got into' is informal; 'which' is not the correct relative pronoun for people/possessions here and word order 'ride a lot with me around' is awkward. Also use of numerals in formal speech should be written as words. Correction: use 'that' for the bike, reorder to 'ride around with me', and use 'had an accident' which is a more neutral past tense. Suggestion: prefer clear past simple verbs and natural word order: 'my dad used to ride around with me' and 'my dad had an accident'.

× Yes, lights are very popular in our country, especially in my hometown.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, especially in my hometown.

ID 26: Sentence structure errors Problem: The student wrote 'lights' instead of 'bikes', which is likely a word choice error causing the sentence to contradict the question. Correction: replace with the intended noun 'bikes' to answer the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen carefully to the question and ensure subject vocabulary matches the topic.

× That's very popular because my place is surrounded by, it's an, uh, urban area, so we don't usually have cars or any big transports in there.

✓ They're very popular because my area is urban, so we don't usually have cars or large vehicles there.

ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article Problems: 'That's very popular' is singular while referring to plural 'bikes'; 'my place is surrounded by, it's an, uh, urban area' is redundant and uses the article 'an' awkwardly; 'big transports' is incorrect collocation. Correction: make number agreement 'They're very popular', simplify to 'my area is urban', and use 'large vehicles' instead of 'big transports'. Suggestion: keep number agreement between subject and verb and use natural collocations like 'large vehicles' or 'public transport'.

× We usually use bikes for easy transportation and people from middle class family don't really have that.

✓ We usually use bikes for easy transportation, and people from middle-class families don't usually have cars.

ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers Problems: 'people from middle class family' is ungrammatical; missing plural 'families' and hyphen in 'middle-class'; 'don't really have that' is vague and uses 'that' to refer to 'cars' which were not explicitly mentioned in the clause. Correction: pluralize and hyphenate 'middle-class families' and specify 'cars' instead of 'that'. Suggestion: ensure correct plural/singular forms and be explicit about what 'that' refers to; use hyphen for compound adjectives 'middle-class'.