Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and repetition. For example, briefly state you didn't have a bike, explain why (couldn’t ride / felt scared) and mention what you used instead (scooter/skates) with a linking word (so/because). Also correct tense and word order (e.g. “I didn’t know how to ride a bike”).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I couldn’t learn to ride a bike, so I felt scared of falling and preferred to use a scooter and skates instead. As a result, I felt more comfortable getting around on them.

제안: Answer directly, then support with specific, coherent reasons and correct grammar. Replace hesitations with short pauses, use linking words (for example, because, therefore, in my area) and correct verb forms and quantifiers (e.g. “many children had bikes” or “two or three children out of five”). Give one clear reason such as convenience, cost, or culture to make your answer convincing.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, when I was a child many families owned at least one bicycle because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. Therefore, it’s common to see children and adults cycling in neighborhoods.

× To be honest, no actually I I don't know how ride a bike so I prefer a role scholar scooter and a skate so I feel more comfortable when I child because I scared right?

✓ To be honest, no. Actually, I don't know how to ride a bike, so I preferred a scooter and skates; I felt more comfortable as a child because I was scared, right?

Errors involve incorrect verb forms and gerund/infinitive use (Grammar Problem Type 8) and related tense issues. 'know how ride' is missing the infinitive marker: correct form is 'know how to ride'. 'prefer a role scholar scooter and a skate' is unclear and uses wrong noun forms; likely intended 'preferred a scooter and skates' (plural for skates). The sentence refers to past childhood, so verbs should be in past tense: 'prefer' -> 'preferred', 'feel' -> 'felt', and 'am/was scared' -> 'was scared'. Also add punctuation and small wording changes for clarity. Suggestion: use 'to + base verb' after 'know how' and maintain consistent past tense when talking about childhood. Keep nouns in correct singular/plural forms (skates is usually plural).

× I think yes, umm, because in my childhood my best friend has a bike and uh, every, uh, two or three, uh, children has have a bike.

✓ I think so. In my childhood my best friend had a bike and, well, two or three other children had bikes.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and tense (Grammar Problem Type 27). Talking about childhood requires past tense: 'has' should be 'had'. Also 'children has have a bike' mixes forms; correct is 'children had bikes' with plural noun 'bikes'. Use 'two or three other children had bikes' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: when describing past situations use past-tense verbs and match plural subjects with plural verb forms (e.g., 'children had').

× So it's more prefer in my country to ride a bike because we have a bike.

✓ So riding bikes is more popular in my country because many of us have them.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and adjective usage (Grammar Problem Type 12) and awkward verb form 'more prefer'. 'Prefer' is a verb and needs a subject; 'more popular' or 'prefer to' would be correct. Also 'we have a bike' is unclear and mismatches pronoun number; better to say 'many of us have them' to refer to bikes. Suggestion: use 'popular' when describing general preference and ensure pronouns and references agree in number (singular/plural).