Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use past tense consistently. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (briefly) using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense/form.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bicycle to ride around the neighborhood, especially on weekends.

제안: Use correct noun forms and add a specific detail or example with a linking word to make the answer more natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then expand briefly with reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many people cycle both for sport and as a hobby, and during weekends you can often see cycling clubs riding together along coastal roads.

× 'No, I don't have a bike. When I was a child, when I was a kid.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

'Present tense is incorrect for a past situation. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so use past simple: did not have. Also the repetition "when I was a child, when I was a kid" is redundant; keep one phrase.'

× 'Yes, bike is popular here in the Philippines because they do this as a sport and also a hobby.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are popular here in the Philippines because people do it as a sport and also as a hobby.'

'Subject-verb agreement and article/number issue: "bike is popular" is incorrect because we refer to bikes in general, so use the plural "bikes are." Also "they do this" is vague and mismatches number/antecedent; use "people do it" or "people ride bikes". Added "as" before "a hobby" for parallel structure.'