Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, sentence structure and naturalness. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, keep it concise (no more than 2–3 sentences), and add one brief supporting detail if needed. For example, say when you had the bike and a short related fact. Avoid mixing present and past forms and unnecessary words.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was seven years old. I loved riding it around my neighborhood and practicing tricks with my friends.

제안: Make the response more natural and concise, correct article and word choice, and use linking words for coherence. Start with a direct opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking phrases like "because" or "also". Avoid filler words (uh) and repetition.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in the Philippines because they are an affordable mode of transport and can easily weave through heavy traffic. In addition, many people use them for short trips around towns and markets.

× I do have a bike when I am seven years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was seven years old.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was seven years old') so present tense 'do have' and 'am' are incorrect. Use simple past 'had' and 'was' to match the past context: 'I had a bike when I was seven years old.' This fixes tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× I do think bikes are popular in the Philippines because it is also a way for a transportation here in the Philippines and it is also, uh, a small or tiny vehicle that can pass through traffic.

✓ I think bikes are popular in the Philippines because they are a means of transportation here and they are small vehicles that can pass through traffic.

The response uses 'do think' (unnecessary emphatic present) and mixes singular pronoun 'it' with plural 'bikes.' Use simple present 'I think' for opinion and change pronouns and verbs to plural to match 'bikes' ('they are'). Replace 'a way for a transportation' with 'a means of transportation' for correct noun usage. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant words to improve clarity.