Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (who used it, how often, a short memory). Keep it natural and under five sentences, and use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so').

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit my friend who lived two streets away, so it was very important for getting around. I also remember learning to balance on it in my parents' garden, which made me feel independent.

제안: Your answer partially addresses the question but is grammatically inconsistent and lacks detail. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no), then support it with specific reasons or examples and use linking words (for example, 'because', 'for instance', 'however'). Avoid vague phrases and ensure verb tense and agreement are correct.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many young people use them for short trips and commuting to university. For instance, cities provide bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes, and even the police sometimes use bikes for patrolling in crowded areas.

× The Acquitals have no bite, but they can ride the bike.

✓ The adults did not have a bike, but they could ride a bike.

The original sentence contains multiple problems: 'Acquitals' is not a correct word and seems to be a misspelling of 'adults' or 'acquaintances'; 'have no bite' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice for 'did not have a bike'; tense and modality should match the past context of 'when you were a child,' so use past simple 'did not have' and past ability 'could'; article use: 'a bike' (not 'the bike') is more natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: choose correct words ('adults' if referring to grown people) and use past simple and 'could' for past ability.

× Yes, most of the young people were.

✓ Yes, most young people are.

The question asks about current popularity ('Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'), so the reply should use present tense. Using 'were' (past tense) is incorrect in this context. Also 'most of the young people' is wordy; 'most young people' is more natural. Suggestion: use present simple 'are' for general statements about current popularity.

× The police have bikes.

✓ The police have bicycles.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but can be improved for formality and clarity: 'bikes' is informal but not wrong; however, in the context of a short answer, 'The police have bicycles' is clearer. No tense change is needed because this is a general present-fact statement. Suggestion: use 'bicycles' for slightly more formal speech; otherwise 'The police have bikes' is acceptable.