Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, clarity and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief specific detail about who gave it and how you felt. Use linking words if you add more than one detail. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My uncle bought me a small red bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I remember practicing in the park every afternoon. Because he taught me how to balance at first, I was confident riding on my own within a week.

제안: Improve clarity, vocabulary and coherence. Give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons with correct collocations (e.g., "ride bikes to college" not "ride bike in our room"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example". Avoid unclear phrases like "public diet."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to university. For example, students often ride bikes to college to save money, and cities have dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safe and convenient.

× Yes, I have a guy that give it to me. Give it to me.

✓ Yes, I had a guy who gave it to me.

Errors: 'have' should be past 'had' because the question asks about childhood; 'that' is acceptable for people but 'who' is better; 'give' should be past 'gave' to match past tense; the repeated 'Give it to me.' is unnecessary and incorrect. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past situations and use 'who' for people. Example: 'Yes, I had a man who gave it to me.'

× Yeah, of course, because we often ride bike in our room, college and on the road.

✓ Yeah, of course, because we often ride bikes at home, at college and on the road.

Errors: 'ride bike' needs plural noun 'bikes' (singular/plural issue ID 1); 'in our room' is incorrect preposition and location for riding — use 'at home' or 'in our room' only if small; 'college' needs article or preposition 'at college'; recommended 'at home, at college and on the road.' Also 'we often ride bikes' matches habitual present tense. Suggestion: Use plural for general activities and appropriate prepositions for locations.

× We also help you bike to be used at the public diet that we can ride in the city.

✓ We also try to make bikes available for public use so that people can ride them around the city.

This sentence has multiple problems: unclear subject and verb choice 'help you bike to be used' is ungrammatical (sentence structure error ID 26); 'public diet' is incorrect word choice — likely 'public use' or 'public transport' (vocabulary); preposition and purpose clause 'that we can ride in the city' is awkward. Suggestion: Rephrase to a clear active sentence: 'We also try to make bikes available for public use so that people can ride them around the city.' This uses correct vocabulary, prepositions and structure.