Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Fix basic grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was a kid. It was my favorite toy because I could ride to the park with my friends, and I learned to ride without training wheels when I was seven.

제안: Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar; make your opinion and reasons specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details connected with linking words (e.g., because, so, for example). Avoid absolute claims unless accurate.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many commuters use motorbikes and bicycles to go to markets or work, especially in crowded cities where parking is limited.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use the past simple tense. Using 'have' (present) with 'when I was' (past clause) is incorrect. Use 'had' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events (I had, I lived, I went).

× Yes, I think bikes are most popular vehicle in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular vehicles in my country.

The phrase 'most popular' describing a category requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also 'vehicles' should be plural to agree with 'bikes' as a general category. Use 'the most popular vehicles' to indicate bikes are at the top of popularity. Suggestion: Use 'the' with superlatives and match noun number to the subject (plural with plural).

× Most of the people are using bikes for casual use.

✓ Most people use bikes for casual trips.

'Most of the people' is wordy and often unnecessary; 'most people' is idiomatic. The progressive 'are using' is odd for a habitual action; simple present 'use' is correct for habitual/general facts. 'For casual use' is awkward; 'for casual trips' or 'for short trips' is clearer. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and choose natural collocations (most people, use, short trips).