Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on clear grammar, correct key words (bike vs bag), and simple past tense for past events. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my father and I rode it every afternoon in the park. Because of that, I have many happy memories of playing outside with my friends.

제안: Use correct vocabulary (bike, not bag) and concise reasons with linking words (because, so). Give one clear opinion sentence then 1–2 supporting reasons with specific details. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms of words.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable and convenient, so many people use them to avoid heavy traffic, especially for short journeys to work or school.

× Yes, I have a bag when I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have...when you were a child?') so the sentence must use past tense. 'Have' (present) should be 'had' (past). Also the student confused 'bike' with 'bag' — use 'bike' to answer accurately. Use 'was' for first-person past: 'I was a child.' Suggestion: Use past tense verbs to describe past situations (had, was).

× It is a gift I father give me and I you always rolled back at the park and I think it is give me the most sweet memories and in today I always write back to study and I.

✓ It was a gift my father gave me. I always rode it to the park, and it gave me my sweetest memories. Even today I often think back to studying and riding it.

This sentence has multiple pronoun and structure errors. 'I father' should be 'my father' (possessive pronoun). 'Give me' should be past tense 'gave me' to match the past context. 'You always rolled back' is incorrect pronoun and verb form; use 'I always rode it' (past of 'ride'). 'It is give me the most sweet memories' mixes tenses and order; use 'it gave me my sweetest memories' and correct adjective order ('sweetest' as superlative). 'In today I always write back to study' is unclear and has incorrect tense and verb choice; changed to 'Even today I often think back to studying and riding it' to convey reflection in present. Suggestions: use correct possessive pronouns (my), past tense verbs for past events (gave, rode), correct pronouns (I), and clear phrasing for reflections (think back to + -ing).

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This question is correct as written; it uses present tense appropriately to ask about a current situation. No correction needed.

× Yes, I think bags are very popular in my country and in today we all have many shared bags and the traffic is always congest congested, so people always use the bags to go to work and study.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Nowadays we have many shared bikes, and traffic is often congested, so people use bikes to go to work and to study.

Multiple issues: wrong noun 'bags' should be 'bikes' to match the question; 'in today' is incorrect phrase — use 'nowadays' or 'today'. 'Shared bags' should be 'shared bikes'. 'Congest congested' is repetition and wrong form; use 'congested' (adjective) and a suitable adverb like 'often'. 'Use the bags' should be 'use bikes'. Tense used is present to describe current situations so maintain present simple. Suggestions: choose correct nouns to match context (bikes), use 'nowadays' for current trends, use 'congested' for traffic description, and keep present simple for habitual facts.