Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can make it more natural and concise. Start with a brief topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating words like “bike” and reduce redundancy (e.g., "did have a bike" → "I did"). Also try to use a slightly wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "nervous" or "wobbly") and keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a small bike without training wheels, which felt a bit wobbly and scary at first, but after a few weeks I became confident. For example, I practiced every afternoon in the park until I could ride along without falling.

제안: Good idea expressed, but the sentence is long and slightly confusing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to contrast cities (e.g., "however" or "on the other hand"). Be specific about reasons (e.g., traffic, cost, infrastructure) and avoid vague phrases like "more comfortable." Aim for two to three concise sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are popular, but it depends on the area. In big cities many people prefer public transport because of heavy traffic and limited bike lanes; however, in smaller towns cycling is common due to quieter streets and lower costs.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Remove the unnecessary auxiliary 'did' in a past simple affirmative sentence. In English, we use 'did' only for negatives and questions in the past simple. Say 'I had' for a simple past affirmative statement. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past facts.

× Yes, I think that bikes are really popular in my country, although it really depends on the city and larger cities you have to use public transportation, but in smaller cities you use bikes which are more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country, although it depends on the city. In larger cities you have to use public transportation, but in smaller cities people use bikes because they are more convenient.

This sentence has several issues: run-on structure and awkward phrasing. Break into two or more sentences, and adjust expressions for natural present-tense statements. Replace 'it really depends on the city and larger cities you have to use' with 'it depends on the city. In larger cities you have to use' to fix sentence structure (Grammar problem type 26: sentence structure). Change 'you use bikes which are more comfortable' to 'people use bikes because they are more convenient' to correct pronoun/generalization and adjective choice (Grammar problem types 12 and 13). Overall use consistent present tense 'think', 'are', 'depends', 'have to use', 'use'.