Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and direct, but very brief. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, how often you rode it, or a short memory). Keep it to a maximum of 5 concise sentences and use a linking word if you add more detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood almost every afternoon. I remember practicing until I could ride without help, which made me feel very proud.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but speech fillers (uh), grammar errors, and unclear phrasing reduce clarity. Improve by removing fillers, using plural/singular correctly, and organizing ideas with linking words (e.g., because, for example, and). Provide one or two specific examples or results (e.g., bike lanes being built or reduced commute time). Limit to up to 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are practical for short trips and help avoid heavy traffic. For example, many cities have introduced bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling safer and more convenient. As a result, more people choose biking for commuting and to reduce pollution.

× Bike is pretty popular in my country uh, because it is a very practical, uh, especially when the traffic is very high, heavy and also, uh, enhance of the uh, green environment, uh, especially government also trying to build this community.

✓ Bikes are pretty popular in my country because they are very practical, especially when traffic is heavy, and they also help to improve the environment. The government is also trying to build more cycling-friendly communities.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and subject-verb agreement issues: The speaker used 'Bike is' but refers to bikes in general, so the plural 'Bikes are' is needed. Pronoun reference and agreement require 'they are' rather than 'it is.' 'Traffic is very high, heavy' is redundant and awkward; 'traffic is heavy' is correct. 'Enhance of the green environment' is ungrammatical; use 'help to improve the environment' or 'enhance the environment.' The clause 'especially government also trying to build this community' lacks a verb form and article; correct to 'The government is also trying to build more cycling-friendly communities.' Suggestions: ensure subjects that refer to general categories use plural nouns (bikes), match pronouns to plural subjects (they), use appropriate verb forms (is/are + -ing), avoid redundant adjectives, and use clear verb phrases for meanings like 'help to improve.'