Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a full, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid one-word answers and filler sounds (uh, um).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used to ride it to the local park every weekend. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to cycle quickly and felt very confident by the time I was eight.

제안: Organize the answer: start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms). Remove hesitations and vague phrases. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many families encourage children to cycle for fun and exercise. For example, parks and bike paths are full of kids and parents at weekends, and local schools often include cycling activities in their sports programs.

× Yes uh, bikes that I like all popular in our country because all our children loves to, uh, ride in the bike, you know, so some some, you know, they uh, like when it in the park and yeah like that.

✓ Yes. The bikes I like are very popular in our country because many children love to ride them in parks.

Multiple errors: (1) Sentence structure is run-on and unclear; reorganize into clear clauses. (2) Subject-verb agreement: 'children loves' should be 'children love' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27, subject-verb agreement). (3) Incorrect relative clause: 'bikes that I like all popular' needs a linking verb 'are'. (4) Incorrect article and noun use: 'ride in the bike' should be 'ride them' or 'ride bikes'. (5) Redundant fillers removed. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, ensure subject and verb agree, use appropriate pronouns for objects (them) and correct verb 'are' for plural predicate."},{